Interview with the Color Purple

"Tell me, Purple, do you envy your sisters?
Do they envy you in the shy morning mist? "

“Pink-Dawn and Day-Blue, both cheerful and pretty,
paint the wide sky in sunlit visions.

I bruise the clouds and make them weep
with rain - to turn the grasses green.

I envy them not, nor they me.
We each take turns to paint the scene.

And sometimes, at the edge of days, 
see us together: Purple, Pink and Blue and Gray!”
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Godwin Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 10:09 AM
OK, I'm totally in like with your imagination / creativity (4th or 5th read). This is inventive and entertaining. I bet you were fun to play with as a child. Probably now, too.
Swan Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 2:11 AM
Thank you for all your kind comments and appreciation. I love words, and metaphor/simile and assonance and alliterating etc - playing with poems and meaning. Hanging out with kids for work (speech pathology) meant playing like I wish I did when a shy child. There have been friendships with swapping fave poems and shared editing turns of each others poems - fun. Best wishes, J :)
Derden Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Your poem is imaginative and graceful—Purple speaks with quiet wisdom and poetic pride. The personification is tender and vivid, and the closing image of unity at day’s edge is simply lovely. You’ve given color a voice, and it sings beautifully.
Swan Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Thanks Danny. Love the big skies. J :)
Freie Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Jeanette, you've touched on my favorite color. Purple hues, (all you Blues, Reds and Yellows), pay your Dues! I'm not talking Smack, when I say, a Lilac Heart Attack, is how I want to Snooze!
Swan Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Randy:)
Freie Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Jeanette, you've touched on my favorite color. Purple hues, (all you Blues, Reds and Yellows), pay your Dues! I'm not talking Smack, when I say, a Lilac Heart Attack, is how I want to Snooze!
Delaney Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 3:10 PM
This is lovely, Jeanette: Dawn and dusk are my favorite times of day for the lovely shades of lavender they bring. So inspiring.
Swan Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Thank you for your comment. Love big sky colours too. One sky. J :)
Willason Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 3:04 PM
Love the perspective you have taken in this poem coupled with some great lines.. I bruise the clouds etc, at the edge of days. Makes you stop and take notice which this poem has achieved. Enjoyed... Take care, Paul
Swan Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 3:07 AM
Thanks Paul for commenting about what you liked. A bonus of traffic lights this time of year, going home, is sky staring time. J :)
Puddifoot Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 12:18 PM
i particularly like the third couplet, and purple is a fave colour of mine; interesting concept to interview a colour...thx for your comment on my work :)
Swan Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 5:17 AM
It was an interesting prompt in a competition:) Re purple in poems: I have loved a line about clouds letting down their purple hair, and have just given up looking for the Australian poem it came from ( I think it is fairly old, from the 50s?) I thought you would like it, but I can't find it! J :)
Wolf Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 6:37 PM
Comes out so nicely in the last couplet Jeanette. Very pretty penning! :) Gershon
Swan Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 9:10 PM
Thanks Gershon :)
Lane Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 7:26 AM
"...the edge of days" is such a beautiful expression for sunset or sunrise. Both times are equally lovely, as if those colors are painted and blended with the Master's brush.
Swan Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Like the tassels on a rug. Thanks Lin for reading and commenting :)
One Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 6:13 AM
A lot of emotions this poem..
Swan Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 6:21 AM
I have a friend who doesn't like purple because it reminds her of bruises... but colours have many moods. Thanks for commenting. J :)
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