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He could see words, but could not read what she had written. A paragraph was as difficult as deciphering telegraph dots for the first time. Cluelessness was washed all over his face. "Honey, what is this?" he asked. "A letter written for you," she replied. She could tell from his face he couldn't read the language of the heart. She had to make him understand. Collected every word and every letter, minced them up in her thoughts, and read them aloud to him. He was devastated. The clues were all there standing right in front of him; a suitcase and cold hands. She was leaving him. They didn't speak the same language... Date: 6/14/2016

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Date: 7/2/2016 1:38:00 AM
Congrats Teddy.. on your win and this wonderful poem ;-)
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Date: 7/1/2016 4:51:00 PM
Ouch. Great poem. 'A suitcase and cold hands', I like that.
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Date: 6/29/2016 5:29:00 AM
Tremendous piece and deserving of top spot!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/29/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard!! ;-)
Date: 6/28/2016 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations Teddy! Nice write! Poignant
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/28/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Ingrid!! *^_^*
Date: 6/27/2016 10:58:00 PM
Teddy... what a well written thought! Congrats on your first place...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/28/2016 2:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Meenakshi!! *^_^*
Date: 6/27/2016 1:18:00 PM
This is amazing,suitcase and cold hands is so powerful.Congrats Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/27/2016 6:16:00 PM
Lol. Thanks for your applause Sara!! *^_^*
Date: 6/27/2016 8:40:00 AM
Excellent, Teddy! Congrats on your well-deserved top win. Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/27/2016 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your applause, Janice!! *^_^*
Date: 6/27/2016 8:26:00 AM
"...a suitcase and cold hands" This one got me reading over and over, and contemplating its subtly "minced" words. Thanks for submitting it to the contest.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/27/2016 6:10:00 PM
Welcome John. It was an awesome contest!! ;-)
Date: 6/14/2016 3:25:00 PM
oh this is GOOD work. I really love this one.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/14/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thanks for enjoying it, Andrea!! *^_^*

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