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Internal Inhibition

A voice inside my soul is my trusted inhibition Yet, how often I aspire to indulge a pleasure Inclined to engage in some frivolous volition, When I am reminded of a greater treasure. A still, small voice inside calls me to consider, To weigh the ultimate reward of my frivolity, Prudent decisions will always faithfully deliver When I remember the better choice’s quality. Some call it conscience, though I prefer to see Divine guidance prompting morals and ethics Which, for me, is doing right things joyfully Following right paths despite persistent critics, Listening to that inner voice has proven wise Teaching me to view life through God’s eyes.
[Internal Inhibition]
THIRD PLACE WINNER written April 24, 2022 for "Pick-A-Title, Vol 30" Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/30/2022 8:10:00 AM
"trusted inhibition" - Great! You write always beautiful. Congratualtions!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/30/2022 9:20:00 AM
Chris, your complimentary comment is so appreciated. Thanks!
Date: 5/29/2022 5:02:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing, unique sonnet poem, Milt:-) Thoroughly enjoyed it, my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/29/2022 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for sponsoring the contest, Edward, and for my placement. I felt honored to be noticed for the poem. I hope you get to feeling better. I've missed seeing your work lately here on the Soup.
Date: 4/25/2022 9:17:00 PM
There is nothing better than "doing right things joyfully"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/26/2022 7:29:00 AM
Absolutely. You can say that again!
Date: 4/24/2022 12:46:00 PM
Very deep look inside oneself here Milton, indulge a pleasure? I’m guessing one either illegal or unethical, strange thing for most people it’s the fear of getting caught prevents the action, not the ethics, but I see in your case it’s a special spiritual one, I enjoyed this openly honest poem, great one for the contest, cheers David
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/24/2022 2:32:00 PM
Thank you, David. It wasn't particularly autobio, but it seemed to meet the requirement of the contest. I'm hopeful. OTOH, I do live my life very much according to my personal ethic. I own my truths.
Date: 4/24/2022 9:22:00 AM
Having that internal inhibition certainly keeps us on the right path. Also the way we have been raised and how we live our lives tells us what is right and what is wrong. Good luck Milton. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/24/2022 9:43:00 AM
So true, Tom. Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem. I always appreciate hearing what you think.

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