Interlude

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Constance La France's Three Options in 1 Contest...24 Jul 2025...' oh my..a spectacle of glorious birds meeting night relieves me from any dark of sorrow.'

avian, radiant---3 syl count

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With keen eyes, I follow July’s evening Spread its blended palette of amber tints, Of varnish 'midst interlude of showers That I enter into nature's mystique; Before me— an avian carousal A radiant skyscape where nightingales And jays reel from warmth of moonlight, aflame Circling within rare space of equinox: Birds' flights slowly disengaging for now From interludes of pewter pewter dew.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/25/2025 7:26:00 AM

Dear Nette, O' what a quiet ritual with July’s twilight brushed in amber, soft rain mingling with mystique. I see the birds in motion, moonlit and tender, a fleeting ballet within the equinox’s splendor. That image of flight fading into pewter dew lingers and so evocative, delicate, deeply felt. Your paintbrush painted the letting go with reverence. Summer Blessings, Dear Nette, Daniel