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Interaction

The other side of the glass a parallel world My fingertips reach Their fingers reach out touch Here There Machinery soflty hums Fingertips touch mine Controlled atmosphere Lives relate for a second Our worlds connect for a small instant Footsteps fade into sunshine ______________________ One line on the glass remains *** July 4, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/12/2017 6:48:00 AM

Oh Darren this is so beautiful so poetic and so reads and feels with the ever popular emotive factor. Honestly. Never stop with the passion. You have graced this reader. Have a wonderful afternoon. -- s m i l e --

Maria Williams

Date: 7/6/2017 12:37:00 AM

I hope the line said 'I love you'? This is a well crafted poem, which I truly love Darren dear friend...Maria

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 12:42:00 AM

I think that the interpretation is entirely up to you, the reader ;)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/4/2017 10:36:00 PM

This reminds me of "Arrival", (in a literal sense), and how many of us live our lives on a daily basis ... always through the glass, always at a distance, always for moments only. Love this - nicely done, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 7/5/2017 2:27:00 AM

I really like it how this poem is a metaphor for so much in life, yes my friend. Indeed, always a glance, a moment.

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/4/2017 10:48:00 AM

Happy Fourth of July Darren. You truly have a talent for arrangement, another great poem

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Edward, I wish YOU happy 4th of July! I am from a part of the world where that is not a special day ;)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/4/2017 10:19:00 AM

Very few understand life outside their bubble. Well written with deep meaning, Darren:)

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:34:00 AM

Indeed Daniel, only a few do. Thank you :)

Sara Ella

Date: 7/4/2017 8:54:00 AM

two worlds meet - This is a haunting poem to me. Especially the last line <3

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:33:00 AM

I'll explain to you ;)

White Wolf

Date: 7/4/2017 7:54:00 AM

Oh, I love how you have done this one, Duir! Excellent

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:32:00 AM

Thanks Budgie my friend :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/4/2017 7:43:00 AM

Excellent my friend...the ying and yang ...love the format you used

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:32:00 AM

Indeed, and then the two connect :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/4/2017 7:08:00 AM

This is very interesting and I like how you wrote this Darren :)

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/4/2017 6:30:00 AM

So well done sweet Piroet, beautiful. xomo

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:30:00 AM

Yo mo! Thank you so much my dear friend :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/4/2017 4:21:00 AM

This is such an unusual and interesting piece Darren. It reminds me of the Mandela effect. Parallel worlds, interacting briefly. There is so much we can't explain and don't understand. I enjoyed this wonderful poem. : )

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thanks Connie, and yes that effect... where it folds, it touches and then you have a parallel world :)