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Inspired By Jan Allison - Humanity

Humanity, once upon a long time ago did live in true paradise! Understanding nature more than we ever have, give and, or take. Moving on when required, leaving land to recuperate, another day. Accepting that they had to share knowledge. not to rob the land! Never turning fertile soil to deserts, to yellowing eroding sand. Indeed collecting, gathering would work today, why don't we try? Take chances, stick to the simple things in life, water, fire, no strife! Yes, we must try to understand that what were doing is'nt grand!

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Date: 11/18/2017 11:50:00 AM
Congrats Mick on a fine placement!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/18/2017 6:24:00 PM
Many thanks John, enjoyed the challenge!
Date: 11/18/2017 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Mick - blessings to you, friend, and keep on writing! :-)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/18/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Gregory, much appreciated, and I surely will keep on writing!
Date: 11/17/2017 7:55:00 AM
Aww I'm glad my poem inspired you to write this fabulous acrostic Mick, i hope you enter it in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/17/2017 8:06:00 AM
Most grateful to you for the inspiration! Wasn't aware that there was a competition for this category, entered now, thanks for the heads up Jan, a big HUG... Mick
Date: 11/17/2017 7:51:00 AM
Lovely Acrostic with much understanding of humanity regaining Humanity in Promised Land, just like the author .You are a winner.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/17/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Ovidiu, its a great pity those in power can't come to terms with what's happening to the planet!

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