Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Inspired

You inspire me
Yet there's no words 
that I can write because
none can describe you
You are beyond words
When I feel I am close I fall short
For you are forever evolving so
my words must evolve too
Making my words just out of reach
Exciting me without touching me
Thrilling me more than any other
Leaving me...
 inspired....


1st place
Contest:180 words
Sponsor:Caren Krutsinger

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Pace Ink-U-Script November 2, 2019 at 8:04 PM Inspiration to inspiration to inspiration....sounds like we all need it from someone or something! Excellent piece!!! Enjoyed!!! INK And congrats on the win!! Brenda Chiri November 2, 2019 at 8:17 PM Yes inspiration is needed always anyway I believe so! All it takes for me is to read someone's poem and if I feel a pulled to it then I'm inspired and the words just flow! Plus it makes for excellent poetry and I am in need of some now so I guess I shall go read you!;) thank you G! Hugs;)

DM Babbit September 23, 2019 at 11:51 AM To all those who do inspire us as you inspire me, congrats. Brenda Chiri September 23, 2019 at 3:17 PM Ahh that's so sweet! Thank you!;)

David Drowley September 18, 2019 at 8:41 PM 'Brenda, Congratulations on your well-deserved first place. Inspiring! David' Brenda Chiri September 23, 2019 at 3:17 PM David thank you so very much!;)

Constance La France September 17, 2019 at 2:40 PM Brenda congratulations on your win Brenda Chiri September 17, 2019 at 4:02 PM Thank you so much!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 17, 2019 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on winning. Your poem is wonderfully expressed and I could read it again and again. Many happy writes. God bless you

John Hamilton September 17, 2019 at 10:16 AM A wonderful write and a great top win, congrats Brenda, I knew you had it in you, now everyone knows! Brenda Chiri September 17, 2019 at 10:31 AM Thank you so much John! That makes my day to hear that!;)

Probir Gupta September 17, 2019 at 6:17 AM Ah, had you lent me your pen for a day or two ...this brevity may be a model for aspiring poets ... Congratulations on your first place ... Brenda Chiri September 17, 2019 at 10:31 AM Lolprobir thank you so much!;)

Jeanne Mcgee September 16, 2019 at 11:23 AM Wonderful win Brenda! Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 12:43 PM Jeanne thank you so much!;)

Richard Lamoureux September 16, 2019 at 11:10 AM Way to go Brenda! Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 11:12 AM Aha thank you Rick!;)

Cindi Rockwell September 16, 2019 at 10:36 AM Great poem! Congrats on your first place! Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 11:11 AM Thank you so much Cindi! Appreciate your visit!

Susan Ashley September 15, 2019 at 6:04 PM Oh dear sister, your poem exudes such exquisite tenderness. Wonderfully contemplative and captivating and beautifully inspired. A fav! Congratulations on your excellent win. Insanity rules, my awesome sis! Lol! Love and hugs always.. your sane Second Place sister ;) Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 12:44 PM ;) Susan Ashley September 15, 2019 at 6:44 PM It should be our new family motto and I’m all for a partay in the tree house. The Unicorns are down wit it too lol! Can’t wait to clink the glasses with you and our bro bro ;) Brenda Chiri September 15, 2019 at 6:07 PM Lol never thought I would live to hear insanity rules!lol! But I like it! Thank you so much sissy you and bro bro are the best! Party in the tree house mansion!;)

Sandra Adams September 15, 2019 at 11:30 AM Back to say Congratulations on your first place win :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 15, 2019 at 5:53 PM Ahh Sandy thank you so very much! This one was easy to write! So many inspire me!;)

William Kelii Kekaula September 15, 2019 at 9:25 AM Well-said! The fortunate are appropriately blessed, having first the mindset to have suggested thoughts realized--AMEN Brenda--you're are definitely a trailblazer and my compliments indeed for 1st Place ~ Aloha always William Brenda Chiri September 15, 2019 at 5:52 PM William thank you so very much my friend!;)

Winged Warrior September 15, 2019 at 8:35 AM Bro Bro is inspired...:o) Susan Ashley September 15, 2019 at 6:45 PM You both inspire me :) Brenda Chiri September 15, 2019 at 5:51 PM I'm so glad bro bro is!;) thanks WW!;)

John Fleming September 7, 2019 at 9:26 AM Great writing, Brenda...you are producing some really excellent poetry of late. Inspired? Whatever the reason(s) it is good stuff. Lots of fond thoughts. :) john Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 11:14 AM Lol you would know my reason John!;) Thank you so much for the boost of confidence and the big smile! Have you written lately? I do need to go check you out again! When I think you haven't you do! All my affection!;)

Sandra Adams September 7, 2019 at 7:25 AM Inspiration often fuels the pen, whatever is inspiring you keep writing, you write beautifully :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 11:16 AM Ahh yes my best work has been written when my pen was inspired! And written in no time at all it just flows from me!Thank you so much sandy that warms my soul to hear your warm words! ;)

Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2019 at 7:52 AM In deed inspirational, but a bit of touching would be the icing on the cake. Hugs Rick. Brenda Chiri September 6, 2019 at 8:48 AM Hahaha! Yea you got that right but the is just fine too!thank so much Rick!;)

Gordon Mcconnell September 5, 2019 at 3:23 PM A lovely inspiring piece Brenda, such nice imagery along with making us grasp to every line. poetry hugs- Gordon Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 3:59 PM Ahh my dear Gordon you are far too kind to me! Thank you!;)

John Hamilton September 5, 2019 at 9:27 AM This is exactly as titled, whatever your inspiration is, keep going back to that well to draw up more beauty from it, it is working just fine! Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 3:59 PM Thank you so much John! It's much appreciated!;)

Chris Green September 5, 2019 at 7:24 AM Each poem you write is an inspiration to us reading. This was no exception. Absolutely beautiful Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 9:07 AM Chris thank you so very much! Thank you for you and others have given me the inspiration to try to be better then I was! Your words have showed me other ways to express myself and I appreciate that!;)

Gershon Wolf September 5, 2019 at 2:55 AM As inspired as you become, reaching to the source of your inspiration with your words, so do your words and your reaching inspire me, your reader,. the witness to this striving. All this is the essence of a win-win-win (!) scenario... I just love how you're writing these poems, Brenda. Bravo! ~ Gershon Brenda Chiri September 15, 2019 at 6:08 PM Thank you so much Gershon! I was surprised to say the least and overjoyed the most!;) Gershon Wolf September 15, 2019 at 11:11 AM Speaking of rising higher: I'd say a #1 trophy win in this contest is a great start! Congrats to you, Brenda! Best wishes, Gershon Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 9:06 AM Gershon thank you so very much! That lightens my heart and makes me feel so good to hear! It means a lot that you have taken to reading my work! I have many who have taken the time to read me this go around and I only hope I can continue this time and rise higher above unlike before!;)