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Inspirational

All my bags are packed, I'm standing at your door, I don't want to go back, I'm looking for more. All my bags are packed, I'm standing at the gates of pearl, I don't want to go back, I want the Lord to say I'm his girl. All my bags are packed, I'm waiting on God to open the gate, I don't want to go back, And lead me by the hand by eight. All my bags are packed, I love you but I'm not scared anymore, I don't want to go back, Oh please let me go forevermore. All my bags are packed, Don't want to feel so alone, I don't want to go back, God is calling me to his home. All my bags are packed, I'm leaving this place, I don't want to go back, I want to feel God's warm embrace. All my bags are packed, On Earth I feel so sad, I don't want to go back, On Heaven I'm very glad.

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Hannah Croy

Date: 11/17/2011 5:57:00 AM

This is very good!!! :) keep writing!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 5:00:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Cassie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Rockman Pritts

Date: 11/16/2011 11:03:00 PM

Cassie, Cassie, Cassie. I don't know you or your life so it's hard to comment on this poem. I don't know if age or the hardships of life have brought you to this point in your life. I also don't know if this is fiction or spectulation. But if you're standing at the door, Jesus said. "Knock and the door shall be opened". He wants you to enjoy your life here and be happy. Just don't be afraid to ask him for directions. As far as the poem goes, it was very good. Good rhyme and rhythym.

Cassie Rutledge
Date: 11/16/2011 11:17:00 PM

I was in a car accident on Sept. 9, 2011 and I just wrote the poem 11-15-2011 I have 3 kids. I love my life but for everyone that has had a bad thing happen in their life that is why I wrote it. And thank you for your comment.