Inspiration

A pencil of sunlight- enlightens the page

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Ed Coet

Date: 10/8/2008 10:45:00 PM

Yes, I think you nailed it Brian. It grabbed me. By the way my new book has just been released. Here are the links: Early order “Poet Coet” through Target on-line: http://www.target.com/Poet-Coet-Ed/dp/0615242111 Preview “Poet Coet”at: http://www.lulu.com/content/3382293 I'd appreciate your spreading the word. Thanks. ED

George Anos

Date: 10/4/2008 6:35:00 PM

Very original Brian! I even felt that glimmer of bright ray hehehe! Brgds. george

Deneen White

Date: 10/4/2008 1:45:00 PM

this brings sunshine into my thoughts, take care D-ncye

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/4/2008 12:03:00 PM

Your imagination exceeds what most of us dream....what a lovely little poem! Sunny thoughts :) ~Carrie

Michael Torres

Date: 10/4/2008 6:45:00 AM

This is a great idea. I will open my window blinds and look for that pencil of sunlight. Very nice thought and creativity. Really enjoyed it. blessings Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/4/2008 5:53:00 AM

So creative Brian. You constantly amaze me with these concise writes that speak volumes. This one shines. Love, Shar

Sara Zahed

Date: 10/4/2008 3:32:00 AM

That is so beautiful!! You have enlightened my day!!! TC...Sara...

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/4/2008 1:31:00 AM

One of my favorites from you Brian - very original thought process - God Bless

P Sheart

Date: 10/4/2008 12:40:00 AM

How witty Brian! This is one of my favorites of yours. ...I can feel the sunlight! You always enlighten us all with your beautifully written poetry. Take care, blessings. Love Light Truth Patricia