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Insightful Awareness

The best way to describe myself: is this insightful awareness of being too attentive and perceptive in the middle of conversations; anticipating words before they are spoken, astonishing others with my answers... and my concepts don't offer advice, but rather a view that some would condemn! And ideas conglomerate like hardened clay, to immortalize all thoughts solemnly, to unite them with a fate of eternity; and their essence is totally congruent, not confounding doubt and truth... conjugating sentences into paragraphs, to make them conduct an intense light, through which hope can't condole wittiness, but conceive a concerted play! They resent me for my ideology, and conjure up an effortless idiocy; and unaware of their idiopathy, their schemes become so ignominious... when they can't decode my idiomatic astuteness! And however apparent is their hypocrisy, they stammer at my insightful awareness and see me as...stubborn, hostile and averse! Perhaps I have exerted excessive cautiousness, not sneering as they did shamelessly; why do they accuse me of being rebellious, illusive, repugnant and impervious? None of these traits make up my personality; and what is the cause of their enmity towards me... not complying to their standards of eccentricity? I put on no guise and avoid turning into a gullible person en masse; and armed with insightful awareness: I discern every enemy's plot! Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 6/18/2009 12:14:00 PM
Being too intuitive can be irksome to those who don't understand your insight, Andrew. Perhaps you might want to consider whether it is more important for you to remain true to yourself at all times or to contain your thoughts and please others. It's a difficult choice. Take it from a virtual hermit who has decided to remain true to herself. I'm sorry you have to experience all of this negativity, but you analyze it very well in your thoughtful, well stated poem. Love, Carolyn
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