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Inside Looking Out

Why are people always on the inside looking out Her hair's a mess oh no she's fat no bothering to doubt They giggle at the stores whenever you pass by And they also whisper it could beget one to cry This is no way to behave you love the other way Maybe things aren't what they seem trust me we're okay

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2020 11:23:00 PM

So many poems to catch up. This is particularly elegant. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/7/2020 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate you reading them when you have time. I'm rewriting and revising a lot of my older poems that I wrote when I was on PS years ago. A lot of grammar mistakes to fix. Thank you again. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/6/2020 4:33:00 AM

I like the positive message, Angela.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/6/2020 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I always try to look at the bright side of things. :)

John Castellenas

Date: 10/6/2020 1:09:00 AM

The quiet people. If we listen, befriend them. What they could tell us. I like the hidden people. I can make them smile, talk and attempt to show face face. True beauty can be seen by open and kind eyes. I enjoyed the poem dear Angela.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/6/2020 10:21:00 AM

Thank you for the kind words, John. I always try to do that also. :)