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Inside a Deep Pine Forest

Inside a deep pine forest where morning mist still lingers an unknown bird takes away my unfinished dreams. Dappled light touches grass tips wakes them up with soft caress whispers to them morning song kisses tiny crowns. Light and shade play hide and seek among them now all my dreams waiting for butterfly wings to take a new flight. ##################

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/19/2013 4:33:00 PM

A beautiful write, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/17/2013 11:06:00 AM

If I had a book filled with your poems to read each night........my dreams would all be magical and lovely. Let me know if you ever publish....I want to be first in line!!

Skat A

Date: 3/7/2013 11:18:00 AM

Good poem Kash~Yours truly *SKAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/2/2013 9:04:00 AM

This is a beauty, Kash......(should be higher on the list in my estimation)...sometimes the softest poems are the ones that touch me deeply. Just lovely!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:13:00 PM

Kash, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/28/2013 7:34:00 AM

amazing poetry, congrats here,,,,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2013 9:15:00 PM

congratulations for your very well deserved win, kashinath. I loved it just as much the second time around.

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2013 12:12:00 PM

Howdy Kash, nice~ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:59:00 PM

KASH, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/11/2013 12:11:00 AM

How beautiful! Waiting for butterfly wings..thats lovely. Congrats. BG

Len Gasun

Date: 1/10/2013 3:46:00 AM

Many congratulations on your super win too, my dear friend Kash! love/hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/9/2013 10:21:00 PM

Nice one Kash, congrats ...Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2013 8:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win kash. Love, joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2013 4:51:00 PM

Congrats on your creative and descriptive winning work..Sara

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 1/9/2013 4:12:00 PM

Beautiful and nice,Kash...Wonderful presentation...Congrats on your well deserved win...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/9/2013 2:58:00 PM

You get a great job Kash! A full tale in 3 verses. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 2:25:00 PM

congratulations on your fantastic win! Beautiful imagery. Always, Annalise

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/9/2013 1:37:00 PM

Beautiful write and congratulations .....thanks for sharing...mehnaz

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations Kash on your winning spot xx

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/21/2012 7:04:00 PM

We all take away something different when we read a poem, Kash. For me, the image of a bird flying away with your unfinished dreams is exquisite! What a scene of imagination..u crafted this one so well. Russell is bound to have at the very very top of the list...gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 5:14:00 PM

Was nice to see you popping in today!

Nina Mindova

Date: 12/19/2012 3:27:00 AM

DO YOU EVER VISIT BULGARIAN DEEP PINE FOREST. IT IS TERRIFIC. YOU STEP IN THE DEEP GREEN GRASS, BREATH CLEAR AND SHINING AIR AND SMELL THE PINE BLOOD. BULGARIA IS UNIQUE.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2012 7:10:00 PM

wow, I love how you pulled it together in the last stanza,making the butterfly a dream about to get wings and take flight. Great word you used, dappled. love seeing you do a gem like this, Kashinath. Guess what? I got a new cat today but right now she is hiding, that's how cats act first day in a new house. her name is Razzmatazz and she's pure black, shiny smooth like satin!!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/18/2012 5:08:00 PM

this is lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2012 12:30:00 PM

A lovely little poem, Kash. - Luck in contest. - ***** - I want to wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas! - I hope Santa Clause does not forget you this year either. - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)