Kash Poet Poet Dodoitsu

Inside a Deep Pine Forest

Inside a deep pine 
forest
where morning mist still 
lingers
an unknown bird takes 
away
my unfinished dreams.

Dappled light touches grass 
tips
wakes them up with soft 
caress
whispers to them morning 
song
kisses tiny crowns.

Light and shade play hide 
and seek
among them now all my 
dreams
waiting for butterfly wings
to take a new flight.

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Kim Merryman June 19, 2013 at 4:33 PM A beautiful write, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards June 17, 2013 at 11:06 AM If I had a book filled with your poems to read each night........my dreams would all be magical and lovely. Let me know if you ever publish....I want to be first in line!!

Skat A March 7, 2013 at 11:18 AM Good poem Kash~Yours truly *SKAT

Carrie Richards March 2, 2013 at 9:04 AM This is a beauty, Kash......(should be higher on the list in my estimation)...sometimes the softest poems are the ones that touch me deeply. Just lovely!

Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 9:13 PM Kash, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Harry Horsman January 28, 2013 at 7:34 AM amazing poetry, congrats here,,,,

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2013 at 9:15 PM congratulations for your very well deserved win, kashinath. I loved it just as much the second time around.

Skat A January 12, 2013 at 12:12 PM Howdy Kash, nice~ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 9:59 PM KASH, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Barbara Gorelick January 11, 2013 at 12:11 AM How beautiful! Waiting for butterfly wings..thats lovely. Congrats. BG

Len Gasun January 10, 2013 at 3:46 AM Many congratulations on your super win too, my dear friend Kash! love/hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts January 9, 2013 at 10:21 PM Nice one Kash, congrats ...Seren

Joyce Johnson January 9, 2013 at 8:49 PM Congratulations on your big win kash. Love, joyce

Sara Kendrick January 9, 2013 at 4:51 PM Congrats on your creative and descriptive winning work..Sara

Olusegun Arowolo January 9, 2013 at 4:12 PM Beautiful and nice,Kash...Wonderful presentation...Congrats on your well deserved win...

Debbie Guzzi January 9, 2013 at 2:58 PM You get a great job Kash! A full tale in 3 verses. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Audrey Haick January 9, 2013 at 2:25 PM congratulations on your fantastic win! Beautiful imagery. Always, Annalise

Mehnaz Veetil January 9, 2013 at 1:37 PM Beautiful write and congratulations .....thanks for sharing...mehnaz

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 9, 2013 at 1:07 PM Congratulations Kash on your winning spot xx

Gwendolen Song December 21, 2012 at 7:04 PM We all take away something different when we read a poem, Kash. For me, the image of a bird flying away with your unfinished dreams is exquisite! What a scene of imagination..u crafted this one so well. Russell is bound to have at the very very top of the list...gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2012 at 5:14 PM Was nice to see you popping in today!

Nina Mindova December 19, 2012 at 3:27 AM DO YOU EVER VISIT BULGARIAN DEEP PINE FOREST. IT IS TERRIFIC. YOU STEP IN THE DEEP GREEN GRASS, BREATH CLEAR AND SHINING AIR AND SMELL THE PINE BLOOD. BULGARIA IS UNIQUE.

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2012 at 7:10 PM wow, I love how you pulled it together in the last stanza,making the butterfly a dream about to get wings and take flight. Great word you used, dappled. love seeing you do a gem like this, Kashinath. Guess what? I got a new cat today but right now she is hiding, that's how cats act first day in a new house. her name is Razzmatazz and she's pure black, shiny smooth like satin!!

Ilene Bauer December 18, 2012 at 5:08 PM this is lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2012 at 12:30 PM A lovely little poem, Kash. - Luck in contest. - ***** - I want to wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas! - I hope Santa Clause does not forget you this year either. - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)

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