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This diet calls for seven containers, large, medium, small, all in bright colors; And all this for a $60 fee, Have some already for free, Again, a diet to make me lighter. ______________________ April 15, 2015 Poetry/Limerick/Insanity Copyright Protected, ID 04-663-266-15 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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John Freeman

Date: 5/1/2015 9:23:00 PM

Oh broken wings sounds so sad for a handle. I loved the rhymes on lines 3 & 4. and the poem was a good illustration of the quote. Smile, Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/25/2015 7:52:00 PM

Made me smile Constance! Light & Love

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/23/2015 8:35:00 PM

great pen Connie gl in contest hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 4/19/2015 5:19:00 AM

lol, couldn't resist reading a limerick too before I continue playing catch up!!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/17/2015 2:26:00 PM

Best of luck in the comp. Love the words.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/16/2015 10:27:00 AM

Wow, first time I got to read a limerick from you, BW...good one! Funny! It kind of stroke a familiar chord. I don't go on diet, but I fast, though!lol! : )

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/15/2015 8:14:00 PM

hahaha !!! I can relate to this as I had done it before but I found in limiting yourself with such will only cause you to eat more like me.. :D~olive eloisa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2015 6:21:00 PM

oh yes, Constance, if there was ever anything insane, it would have to be doing crazy diets over and over again. VERY good idea.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2015 1:23:00 PM

Interesting work..I would guess the largest one is for dessert..LOL Thanks for stopping by..This one reads like a winner//Sara

Nandita Das

Date: 4/15/2015 1:17:00 PM

Great wit. Great limerick. Very well done. Definitely #7

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/15/2015 12:33:00 PM

ohh my.. this is a rib-tickler, constance.. how many more containers?... well done.. huggs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/15/2015 11:54:00 AM

Your poem is so witty! If we had only empty containers, just think how much "lighter" all of us would be! Unfortunately for me, a psychologist told me I was doing just what Einstein's definition of insanity is. Oh well, let's just smile! Best wishes in John's contest. I'm glad to hear he's back on the Soup. Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2015 10:38:00 AM

ha ha ha love your take on the them - hope this does well for you in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/15/2015 9:52:00 AM

I agree, you have great talent and wit. Very intelligent, thought provoking write! Thanks for sharing! God bless!

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/15/2015 8:46:00 AM

Your talent and wit wrap themselves around your words and we are left questioning our perceptions of insanity when it comes to diets. Emile.