Insane Poems

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I used to know a poet named Lin Lane
she often walked in the thundering rain
one day she got a jolt
from a fierce lightning bolt
and now all of her poems are insane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sage Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 7:07 AM
well, you have a reason for insane poems, you've been charged by that jolt lol...you've done well with the rhyme, i hope you stay away from rain
Lane Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Never! I love walking in the rain, but I'll be more careful about lightning storms. Thanks, friend.
Palli Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Love it! Great job
Lane Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thank you very much, Susan.
Hicks Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:57 AM
There once was a poet, strikingly normal: he wrote poetry, regulated and formal. Until one strange day rebellion took sway, and added "para" to go with his "normal" ("ab" too ... but still has the beer gut) ... stay insane, Lin. Normalcy is overrated.
Lane Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:04 AM
lol funny, Tim. As to being 'normal,'...I don't think that word belongs in society. I'll stay insane and thank you. ;)
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Hey, dear.....that last line is ME!!! :) Loved the humor here...hugs
Lane Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:05 AM
ha, Eileen. Insane, inane...not much difference in meaning and in only one letter. Thanks for liking this one.
Turner Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Well not all of them. LOL Bully for you, Peaches. Peace my dear friend:)
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Hey, Daniel. I guess there's a part of a poet's psyche that must be a little insane to dig into their mind and heart and reveal their deepest emotions to the world. Thank you so much for liking this one.
Carter Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Haha, nice! Although, I sometimes feel insane without the lightning, so you have a good excuse :) -Dan
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:45 PM
lol well maybe the lightning add a little zest to the insanity. Thanks so much, Daniel.
Smith Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Insane is this poet named Lin...read her and commit a big sin....I will take that gamble...on those words that ramble....in search of a fabulous grin
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:39 PM
You got a GREAT BIG grin out of me when I read your poetic comment. Thanks so very much, Tim. Love it!
Bauer Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 6:56 PM
ha! very funny and charming, lin!
Lane Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thanks so much for your comments, Ilene. ;)
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