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The walls are stained by my fingers,
raw from trying to scratch them away,
but they’re unharmed and unmarked
on the random spots, here and there,
where I broke my knuckles
thinking I could knock them down,
and the lies and truths that passed me by,
and the things I couldn’t be bothered with,
were opportunities gone a-begging,
moving lips, I couldn’t hear a thing
and I don’t know what they said.
I don’t remember the things you told me
but I do remember you telling me,
and I believe the worst of it
and I don’t care for the rest,
I might have loved the design, though,
and I know the machine was ruined
before the engineers and the technicians
even knew that it existed.
The TV is on for now,
a million faces and a million voices
and a million unthinkable miseries,
they knock on the screen from inside
and they cannot reach me,
it’s all white noise, though, anyway,
unless I apply an ear well enough
to pick out a particular sound or two
and make of it whatever I will.
I’m not quite sure of what it was
that you knocked into my head,
but I wish to God I could only know
half of what you knocked out of it.

7th February 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/24/2019 9:30:00 AM
Riveting prose, L. Sharp! Your stream of consciousness is a muse river that defies metaphysics ... it elevate upwards against scoffer gravity that pulls downward. Your mind is a global treasure! GrEaT poetry, my talented friend. Love and more love always.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 5/26/2019 11:34:00 PM
RomWar, your eclectic expressions and words of encouragement never fail to make me smile, my friend; thank you no end... peace, rest...
Date: 3/7/2019 11:11:00 AM
Hello Lawrence Sharp, you created a deep well written poem. have a nice day my friend
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/7/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene, your visit and comment is very kind.
Date: 2/15/2019 12:34:00 AM
I hear you. I have 6% hearing loss from 30 years working as teacher in noisy childcare centres. Feel for the children exposed, A lady in NZ promoting earmuffs for babies in Day care. I wear hearing aids to filter out background or white noise.They were not cheap but worth the price. White noise not always a figment of our imagination. Best regards David in NZ
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 2/15/2019 8:04:00 AM
Though my white noise, and most of the rest of the write, are largely metaphoric, your vivid insight offers great new perspective. A very well received visit and comment, Kiwi, always good to have you here.
Date: 2/12/2019 4:45:00 AM
Nicely done :)
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 2/12/2019 10:18:00 AM
Thanks, Swetha, visit and comment appreciated.
Date: 2/11/2019 1:22:00 PM
a barrage of scolding thoughts and feelings makes this piece truly intense... good one, lawrence!... huggs
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 2/11/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thanks, Nette, glad you enjoyed... and yes, there was an intense personal process that created this piece. Comments appreciated.
Date: 2/10/2019 9:21:00 AM
Such depth in thought, imagination, superbly crafted verse deserves immense applause and sincere appreciation for a poet's great talent and dedication to his art and to life! A true and gleaming gem my dear friend and a wonderful fav for me to add to my fav list.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 2/10/2019 11:52:00 AM
Thanks, Robert, very kind. Your encouragement is always very highly prized, my friend.
Date: 2/7/2019 1:40:00 PM
"but I wish to God I could only know half of what you knocked out of it" This thought holds me for some reason. There are so many moments within, many emotions tangling the heart. You certainly know how to draw the reader in with your words. Deep and powerful indeed. ~ Brandy
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 2/7/2019 10:17:00 PM
Thanks, Brandy, I'm very pleased if any of it has any value to the reader. Always good to have you here.
Date: 2/7/2019 10:05:00 AM
My thoughts run dark sometimes, but when I read another's I feel scary. You are such a good writer.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 2/7/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Sunlite, very good to have you here, and kind words very deeply appreciated.
Date: 2/7/2019 9:58:00 AM
A battle of emotions and thoughts..very deep my friend..life is so complicated..so many impulses we receive..sometimes we know what to make of it..sometimes.. Anyway..intriguing, as always.
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, I'm always pleased if you enjoy dissecting it a little bit.
Date: 2/7/2019 9:33:00 AM
WOW. I wish I had a more eloquent word for it. How about, FAVE. ;)
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mo, far too kind, really appreciated.
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