Innocent Young Minds

Innocent young lives abruptly changed
When brutal war arrived at their doorsteps,
Turning makeshift shelters into their abodes
As bombs ruined neighborhoods and roads.

Delicate young souls understood very little
When living became a pile of torn-up rubble
Bearing no likeness to what once was normal
As look of disgust occupied entire existence.

Fear transformed into acceptance of cruelty
As supplies for meek survival became a rarity.
Where innocence once lived anger took hold
When virgin-minds became angry soldiers.

Rescue never came, turning anger into hate
As grief became despair at a very young age.
Without basic care, disease reigned misery
Dissipating young minds into hapless calamity.

If wisdom gains vitality, hope will rise again
And compassion will illuminate world stage.

From ashes of nightmare, can dreams originate
Holding a toy of joy, like children of their age?

February 11, 2018
Placed first in standard contest 165 by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/16/2023 7:54:00 AM
War changes life all together and all of a sudden. Then pain and fear grow into anger and bitterness ! But from the ashes of nightmare, the phoenix can rise ! The poem started on a sad note, but ended with a flicker of hope. Well done, dear friend
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Date: 1/24/2019 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
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Date: 12/31/2018 10:52:00 AM
Hi Vijay, an excellent write on the subject, so well written. Such sadness, the effect war does have on innocent minds. Vijay, you bring us into the heart of your words and emotions are touched so deeply. tears again my friend. You write with such emotion my friend. Love the sad content. Have a wonderful New Year. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/9/2018 3:58:00 PM
That is loss of innocence indeed. Very troubling. Congrats on your win, Vijay.
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Date: 2/28/2018 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. A great take on the theme and very well expressed. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/21/2018 11:08:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this great write! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2018 12:46:00 PM
Congratulation Vijay on your excellent win with your poem depicting war's devastation mentally, emotionally and physically on young lives. So sad and so powerful! ~Susan
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Date: 2/21/2018 11:08:00 AM
a compelling write Vijay, congratulations...
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Date: 2/21/2018 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice success for this great write, Vijay ...
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Date: 2/12/2018 11:59:00 AM
Great write , Vija.. W A R .. how would we all feel if it was on our front door.. I am frightened to think. While our own leader is instagaiting with his cocky remarks .Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Eve..I share your sentiments about war and our leader.
Date: 2/12/2018 9:58:00 AM
This is such an excellent description of what war does and how wasteful it is on so many levels. A great theme and entry for the contest- best !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 12:05:00 PM
Thank you Mike..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 2/12/2018 9:43:00 AM
The devastation of war :( I can't imagine what that must be like to live in a war zone and I hope I never have to know. It is terribly sad. I wish we could all live in peace. Someday, we will.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Becca..I share the sentiments.
Date: 2/12/2018 8:06:00 AM
What an excellent choice for this contest Vijay.. Don't get me started on this subject!!! I am anti-war and this saddens me so much.. Great poem though with great flow..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 12:04:00 PM
I share your sentiments about war..thank you Silent One.
Date: 2/12/2018 3:12:00 AM
- I finish this poem with a tear, Vijay - Great written - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate the sentiments in your comments.
Date: 2/11/2018 8:48:00 PM
This poem has great impact for the theme of loss of innocence. Its message is just so relevant. Why can't people learn??
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 6:20:00 AM
Appreciate the sentiments in your comments..many thanks Andrea.
Date: 2/11/2018 7:11:00 PM
It is so tragic to see how the ravages of war affect young minds and lives. Well written and thought provoking verse, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 6:19:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Laura..many thanks.
Date: 2/11/2018 2:30:00 PM
A lovely poem depicting the sadness that war brings with it. Unfortunately such situations cut short the joy and innocence of young people who suddenly grow up beyond their years. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 6:17:00 AM
You are so right Paul..many thanks for your comments.
Date: 2/11/2018 2:18:00 PM
A very important poem for all... These money seekers must fall...As every action has a reaction... their doom is coming for sure...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2018 6:16:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Arturo..many thanks for your support.
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