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Innocences Is Thrown ... (Round 1) Sarah Hales V Sonnet Man ...

An urgent breath upon my neck A innocences tied to me Clothes pulled from me Silk and lace have no grace As they lay upon the floor You close the door You lock it behind you Your kiss is more a bite I try to fight But the darkness has your light My curiosty takes me along A cry as i find you deep inside Your body covers mine A groan from you as you hold my mind A seduction of force that i do not ignore My gasps of endless moments of you My eyes closed as my innocences is thrown Then you leave the room .....

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James Fraser

Date: 6/20/2010 5:49:00 AM

Interesting challenge Sarah, this I must follow to the end >> James

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/19/2010 1:37:00 PM

I think you have him beat Sarah! Love the descriptions!~Tirzah~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/19/2010 1:22:00 PM

Well I read his Sonnet and its quite good.. I told him ..let the lady think about it ..haha.. now where is your reply to him..is this one it because as I said its EXCELLENT Sarah... with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/19/2010 12:37:00 PM

Wow Sarah.. what a masterpiece poem.. so deep and vibrant in every line.. u describe the scene so intensely.. a new fav for the "Sweetheart"

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 6/19/2010 11:55:00 AM

i will post my retort tomorrow. round two will be more intense on my part. i had to get a "feel" for you and believe me you did not disappoint. i am thoroughly impressed. i love a challenge as p.d. will tell you. you are more than a worth aponent. i just might lose my reputation as the worlds greatest flirt on this one. until tomorrow my dear. i am going to have to do some serious writing.

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 6/19/2010 11:50:00 AM

this was a very good first blow. i am staggering now. but i will not go down without a fight

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2010 11:41:00 AM

So far so good for round #1, Sarah you are an impressive poet. Doc, is my friend . But you got this one my friend,..p..d..oh my this is good...Dakarai eat your own heart out,..p.d.