Innocence Lost

   horse feathers!

   'my little pony'  

     ~ all grown up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Legros Kelley Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 1:29 PM
The nays have it!
Wolf Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 7:26 PM
lol. Took me three looks to grasp this one. SO PROFOUND. lol again, Bj. ~ Just horsin' around
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 2:11 AM
I understand this one more since I read the one about your son in the military. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 7:17 PM
Thank you, Sara. Peace on Earth; goodwill toward men.
Fisher Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Funny, but sad, of course.
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Weap no tears for little pony, Brother David. She banked more in her youth than we'll ever see in a lifetime...
Parker Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 5:04 PM
next stop a dude ranch for celebrity "cowboys and cowgirls"!!! then out to stud...the life of a horse. :o))
Baker Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 2:38 PM
I like the humor in this Senryu, gw, a fun read, my friend. Bill
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 2:35 AM
The clock ticks for us all lol. Tom
Ball Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 12:59 AM
This gave me a good giggle. Loved it. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB
M  Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 12:31 AM
Hehe thats funny BB! If you've been good you may get another one for Christmas!! Debx
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Haha. I'm asking Santa for a Broken-down nag with a white mane and a cane. By comparison, I'll look like a million bales of hay. :) gw
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