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Innocence

do not wake her up lest her dreams blossom and fade let her be a bud 27 July 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/3/2021 4:32:00 AM

Gorgeous haiku my friend!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/3/2021 4:41:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/29/2021 12:01:00 AM

Ah, what a beautiful sentiment! Lovely Haiku, well done

Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/2/2021 12:00:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2021 4:32:00 PM

Fantastic!!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/28/2021 7:22:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2021 6:36:00 AM

Metaphorically charming, Christuraj. Once that innocent age ends there is no going back. ~Regards // paul

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/28/2021 7:22:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Constance La France

Date: 7/27/2021 2:42:00 PM

Christuraj, beautiful haiku, so visual, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 9:44:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/27/2021 12:43:00 PM

I love this. Beautiful imagery, Christuraj. :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 9:44:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2021 12:21:00 PM

Really interesting Chris - so visual!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 9:43:00 PM

Thank ypu very much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2021 11:42:00 AM

Awe. I really like this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 9:42:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2021 8:35:00 AM

You captured innocence well in your haiku Christuraj. Tom

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 9:42:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/27/2021 7:44:00 AM

Wow! Every line superb. As a female,I can relate to this very well. Loved it! Saving to my favourite. ...... You sure know how to encourage a person by your wonderful comments. Thanks!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/27/2021 9:41:00 PM

Thank you very much.