Innocence

I am man
I am love
I am man
I am evil
I am man
I may smile
I may cry
I may save you
I may die
I am the result
Of a couples dream
I am life
Or so it would seem
I can do a great many things
I am just one
Of the father of all kings
I am the life, love and birth
I am the child to assess it’s worth
I am the prayer
I am the payer
I am the slayer
I am the hopeful
I am the dreamer
I am he………….
Who understands

Eric (and sometimes not)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/16/2010 2:02:00 PM
Well..you know I thought you were going to say JC? LOL I believe God is within our cells as well as our Universe..so it's OK! Light & Love
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Date: 1/15/2010 8:19:00 AM
Bold and unique! Congratulations!---Milt
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Date: 1/12/2010 11:41:00 AM
LOL ... love the last line here. Wonderfully written!!
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Date: 1/12/2010 5:06:00 AM
Every one of us brings something special to the table, and each one something different. Together we are all those things and more. Congrats on the feature. There is a depth to this one. Vince
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Date: 1/11/2010 3:44:00 PM
Thank you all very much for your comments I really appreciate it very much, it means a great deal to me. Thank you
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:48:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Eric >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:25:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, ERic and sometimes not. Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Eric. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured Poem. Eric. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:57:00 PM
Hi Eric,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:23:00 PM
Thought provoking. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:51:00 AM
Eric - another wonderful piece. Many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:36:00 AM
As always thank you for your words, I appreciate it very much.
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:32:00 AM
And men we are Eric, nice write >> James
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:56:00 AM
This one is very strong. It reads very stream of consciousness.
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Date: 1/9/2009 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Laurie I really appreciate your feedback it means alot to me.
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Date: 1/9/2009 4:03:00 AM
THis is great Eric, a pleasure to read. Laurie
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Tyesha I take that as a great compliment coming from you as you are also a truly talented individual yourself. I have never read anyone else's poetry I have enjoyed more. I myself just joined the Soup this evening and I am glad I did, I never had a clue what I was missing. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:00:00 PM
Wow, Eric..this one took my breath away, it was truly inspiring and passionately expressed, you have a great gift, continue to express it to the fullest and share as much as you can with others, Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments and feedback, I truly appreciate it, and you are most welcome, I've been on Poetry soup for less than two weeks but it has been such a blessing for me,I am discovering all the wonderful gifts of the written soul and all the stories untold.God Bless, tyesha
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