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Innocence - - Kimo

INNOCENCE Innocence, still lingering in first love, unable to acknowledge the emptiness of time. John G. Lawless In Praise of a Kimo – Poetry Contest 2/16/2015 Visual #2

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Sandra Haight

Date: 2/18/2015 4:13:00 PM

Nice poetic interpretation of that visual, John. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/17/2015 7:49:00 AM

What a great interpretation of the visual in Kimo. I was stumped on that one. You seemed to have dived into it's essence. Best of luck to you also in the contest !!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/16/2015 11:48:00 PM

wonderful Kimo, John and good luck. Mohan

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2015 4:32:00 PM

beautifully penned John good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx