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Inner Strength

I wanted to be free of hurt and pain. Your cruel act left a horrible stain. I wanted to just vanish, I longed to be banished. You took my self worth. and I questioned my birth. I was numb, and I felt dumb. I hated life, I felt only strife. Each time you touched me, I died slowly. You caused me to live in fear. You robbed me of my tears. I became a mute, I couldn't speak, but one day silence reached it's pique. I found my voice and I wanted to live, and I had to somehow survive. My inner strength rose up very bold I told you to take your filthy hands of me, and I felt a gentle peace take hold. I went from a victim to a victor instantly. Contest Name:Victim Or Victor Date Finalized: 09-21-16 10-08-16 Contest: Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please- 2 Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 12/23/2016 2:51:00 PM
I agree w/BW. Such a strong poem of triumph and resiliency. A beautiful combo to achieve in life. You are a winner in my book all day long. Lots of power in this poem. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 10/16/2016 8:13:00 PM
Alexis a wonderful strong poem. congratulations on your win in my contest
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Date: 10/15/2016 1:21:00 AM
deep write, alexis..sending my big congrats with huggs
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Date: 9/27/2016 8:34:00 AM
I know from reading this that it is true, it's very well written, Alexis, even though it didn't place in the contest... The last stanza makes it special:) be strong in the Lord, dear friend:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:32:00 PM
Very nice poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:14:00 PM
Great poem Alexis. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:23:00 PM
Hi Armand, It's so nice to see you. Thanks for wishing me luck in the contest. The contest is closed and I didn't place. But I'm still happy with the end result of this poem.I appreciate that you stopped by today: -) Alexis
Date: 9/20/2016 5:28:00 PM
Wow what a powerful poem Alexis - a realistic portrayal from victim to victor. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:25:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks for wishing me luck. I didn't place but I'm still happy with the end result of this poem. But I see you placed so congratulations to you my friend: -) Alexis
Date: 9/20/2016 3:58:00 PM
Great poem and an even better outcome. No woman should ever have to live in fear. "A fav."
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:27:00 PM
Hi Carol, Thank you very much. I agree no woman should live in fear. I appreciate you faved this piece. I'm glad you stopped by:-) Alexis

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