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Dion Warwick shook me awake this morning unfairly accusing me of being a 'Heartbreaker' Over coffee, Neil Diamond chimed in with his girlfriend 'Sweet Caroline' The Allman Brothers piled in my car and did a punishing version of 'Whippin' Post' J. S. Bach pranced with precision beside me at work conducting 'Brandenburg Concertos' Cocky ole Waylon Jennings relieved him after lunch braggin' that he was a 'Honky-Tonk Hero' Aretha Franklin nagged me all the way home claiming I didn't show enough 'Respect' Jimi Hendrix freaked me out in the shower with a shocking dose of 'Purple Haze' Had dinner at 'MacArthur's Park' with Donna Summer (They served some rather soggy cake for dessert) Then the whole gang treated me to an evening concert by the Royal Scottish Bagpipes performing 'Amazing Grace' Wiping my tears, I bid them God's speed and goodnight Can't WAIT to see who's on tap for tomorrow...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/1/2013 12:03:00 PM
Tremendous write! Congrats on the win... Well worth it!
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Date: 12/3/2012 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Tim! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/27/2012 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Tim, would have placed this little gem higher xx
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Date: 11/26/2012 9:43:00 PM
Tim, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry..pd
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:09:00 AM
What would our lives be without music? I think you've probably mentioned your faves and have to say they make my day too. Really nice Tim and so different...variety is spice! :)
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:02:00 PM
TimStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful write! It's amazing how much music affects our lives especially when a tune gets stuck in your head, then you go all day humming!
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Date: 11/16/2012 3:26:00 PM
if its music you write about i'm all ears, love the structure of this poem, and the reminder, of yesterday....
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Date: 11/15/2012 4:55:00 PM
I get all this on old radio!!! Is that what you mean by who needs Ipod? I hardly know what it means, but I sure don't need it!!! great poem.
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Date: 11/15/2012 4:09:00 PM
a very interesting playlist and a well-written poem!
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Date: 11/15/2012 6:16:00 AM
Oh, that is really neat, Tim. I like it.
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