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Inner Cosmos

Your feathered words arrive tickling my ears The tip of your nose brushes The back of my neck My skin awakens I have been calling you Calling you back into my consciousness My heart My soul Speak to me.... let me hear you Your deep voice Your warm breath I feel you on my cheeks Memories of our times together Dancing in the raindrops Naked...laughing Warm pink drops Cascading through the canopy of A million greens above us Sunlight seeping through A kaleidoscope throwing rays of light Shafts and shadows embracing your form Noir velvet and gold shimmer An ethereal statue before me Sitting cross legged on mammoth leaves We press our palms together Looking into your eyes Past now...to before And back to now again A forever embrace cradled in unity Overhead the drip drop melody of A thousand tears Falling from the heavens Audible in form We have been here before Surrounded in green majesty Gazing towards a swaying tribe of ladybugs Red with black spots Surrounded in light...glowing Radiating love I hover above you spread eagle Close enough to caress your forehead With my lips Leaving a gentle imprint A message of hope Fly with me to the clouds Where we may gallop and play Frolicking through lush planetary fields Fly now...ride on my white wings Up....up ...up Past turmoil and confusion Tragedy and loss Through the lavender veil To cloudbursts and mist Mystery and rebirth Infinite space and distant time surround us We gasp and giggle Weightless vibrations inhabit us Turning towards each other in delight We cartwheel through the sky And make snow angels On the hills of magenta clouds

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Date: 6/8/2022 2:42:00 PM
Isn't it nice to dream about being on a cloud. I enjoyed your creative lines penned in this one. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/21/2022 11:07:00 AM
Sara, A very belated thanks for your visit and comments ! Hugs and all good wishes. Susan :)
Date: 4/6/2022 3:00:00 PM
Romantic dances in the raindrops, and enchanting cartwheels through clouds, Wonderful write Susan
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/8/2022 6:49:00 AM
Hi Joseph ! Thank you for your visit ! So happy you could join me on this journey. All the best to you , Susan :)
Date: 3/21/2022 9:03:00 AM
Your poems seem to blend yoga, meditation, and Nature's gentle colors and healings. ThanX. PTL
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/29/2022 9:48:00 AM
Hi Anil, Thank you for the insight and lovely comment . Best to you , Susan :)
Date: 2/27/2022 8:35:00 AM
What a lovely and memorable moment of togetherness in blissful love and romance ! Unlike ordinary love poems with cliched images and metaphors, this stands out . Wonderful write and it goes into my FAV. Susan
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Date: 2/27/2022 3:27:00 PM
Valsa, In gratitude for your visit, comments and Fav ! Thank you . I am happy we could journey together in this poem . Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 2/22/2022 4:38:00 PM
So lovely, Susan. "sunlight seeping through a kaleidoscope..." "through the lavender veil to cloudburst and mist" Those lines especially got me. Just a lovely pen throughout :)
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/23/2022 10:21:00 AM
Dear Ann , Thank you for your visit and grateful for your presence. Blessings, Susan :)
Date: 2/13/2022 4:26:00 AM
This is a really beautiful poem and one to be revisited often. I especially liked, “ Cascading through the canopy of A million greens above us”, & “ Surrounded in green majesty. Best, SuZ
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Date: 2/16/2022 6:53:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and lovely comments SuZ . Happy to journey with you. Cheers , Susan :)
Date: 1/7/2022 10:12:00 AM
Your pen has an ethereal quality & supply of myriad colors. Cosmos gets me paying attention. You and All of us AND THE UNIVERSE make a singular, essential expression. Peace
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Date: 1/8/2022 9:09:00 AM
Peace to you Anil . Happy you could join me on this journey. Thank you for your participation and comments. In gratitude, Susan :)
Date: 1/6/2022 10:33:00 AM
I was going to highlight my favorite parts so I could tell you what they were. I ended up highlighting almost the entire poem, so I put it on my FAVE list.
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Date: 1/7/2022 7:23:00 AM
Hi Caren, Thank you ! I am so very happy my poem moved you. Sending all good wishes for a wonderful new year. Susan :)
Date: 12/20/2021 12:27:00 PM
Your "Inner Cosmos" is a beautiful write. A "Wonderful" story you told. Love It. Wish you would write more. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 12/21/2021 3:21:00 PM
Hi Paula . Thank you for your visit and comments . Blessings to you and yours . I posted a new poem today . Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 12/3/2021 2:41:00 PM
Powerful. Beautiful! Elegant! Ok, I bit back a tear or two. I am not easily moved. This avoids the cliches that make me choke on some RRRR ok most love poems. BUT it is awesome. LOVE IT! will be reading more. Did you mean "show" or snow angels, either way, it works...
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Date: 12/3/2021 10:47:00 PM
Hi Jehiel, So happy for your visit . I am thrilled my poem moved you. I appreciate your comments. A tear can be a good thing ! Thank you for pointing out the snow angels typo !!! Yes it is snow angels . I corrected it . Looking forward to reading your poems . Cheers, Susan :)
Date: 11/26/2021 4:11:00 PM
Just beautiful! I especially loved ...and make snow angels on the hills of magenta clouds. It paints such a gorgeous sight.
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Date: 11/27/2021 5:42:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comments Ann . Much appreciated. Susan :)
Date: 11/17/2021 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your "Dark Lake" sale, but the buyer should have purchased, "After the Storm" with it! Aloha 'oe!
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Date: 11/17/2021 10:43:00 AM
yes !! Hugs, Susan :)
Date: 11/14/2021 9:50:00 PM
Oh this is so lovely, a poetic gem, dissevered POTD.
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Date: 11/17/2021 10:42:00 AM
Thank you dear Harry, Big hugs , Susan :)
Date: 11/14/2021 2:16:00 AM
Your poetry is unique my friend, this one included, your imagery rocks and this poem is so tender and melancholy. I applaud you and congratulate you on your intense poem been chosen as POTD. You deserve the honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/17/2021 10:42:00 AM
Jennifer, So happy to have found you o the Soup. I appreciate your comments and support. I am happy we can soar together my friend! Hugs to you and all good wishes, Susan :)
Date: 11/13/2021 5:36:00 PM
Susan, this journey through the clouds, sky, and planets is a lush dreamscape of nature, longing, beauty, joy, and romance, with a sprinkling of melancholy. It is tantalizing to dream of rising above the tumult and simply play in weightless flight with one you love. I love the lines, 'Cascading through the canopy of / A million greens above us', and 'Frolicking through lush planetary fields'. Your creations are always highly anticipated and this one comes straight from the heart and settles in the soul. A much enjoyed read, going in my faves, and warm congrats for your POTD honor. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 11/17/2021 10:40:00 AM
Dear John, So happy for your visit and amazing comments and support. I am thrilled that we can journey together ! Hugs to you my friend. Looking forward to reading more of your magic. Susan :)
Date: 11/9/2021 11:33:00 PM
Aww, what an excellent exquisite write dear Susan...am so sorry for being here so late to congratulate you on your very well deserved POTD honor dear sweet friend...you are a very talented artist, and that creativity is seen in all your poems that are very RICH in imagery. Another poetic gem from you...BIG hugs...~ Ani
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:07:00 AM
Dear Ani my friend, Thank you for your light spirit and all the peace and love that you radiate. I am so grateful to have you on my journey and be able to share with you!Big hugs and love always, Susan :)
Date: 11/8/2021 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations!!! and enjoy the honour Susan! Best wishes!! Hugs... Priya.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Priya ! All the best, Susan :)
Date: 11/8/2021 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your very merited POTD award, Susan! Imagery and metaphor give us a delightful peek into your inner self. ~ Best regards // paul
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:05:00 AM
Dear Paul, Thank you for your visit and your wonderful comments. I hug you ! All the best, Susan :)
Date: 11/8/2021 5:09:00 AM
An inner joy after each drop of your soulful words.. waves of a wonderful trance drifting the soul to your mysterious realm.. An "Inner Cosmos" of beauty and spirituality earned the honour and recognition of your dear fellow poets and friends! I join here to congratulate you, dear Susan, on the POTD acknowledgement! A true gem of rarity! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:02:00 AM
Dearest Besma, So much gratitude for your beautiful energy and words of appreciation. I always learn from your deep spiritual poems and I am so very happy to have you on my journey of the soul and all it reveals. Love and hugs to you my friend, Susan :)
Date: 11/7/2021 1:23:00 PM
Quite a good write and congrat's on your win.
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Date: 11/11/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you M.L.! All the best, Susan :)
Date: 11/6/2021 5:13:00 AM
I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win. Well penned.
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Paghunda ! Happy to find you and your work . Best wishes to you, Susan :)
Date: 11/5/2021 10:07:00 PM
Susan, this is a lovely memorable peek into the cosmos. I love to write about the cosmos and love reading about it too. Congratulations on your deserving honor of POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:57:00 AM
Dear Connie , Grateful for your visit, your comments and warm congratulations. I noticed you just wrote a cosmic poem … Can’t wait to read it ! Hugs and love, Susan :)
Date: 11/5/2021 6:11:00 PM
Enjoy floating in the magic of those exciting, yet dreamy moments. Congratulations Susan, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:55:00 AM
Thank you dear Brandy . I enjoy floating in your magical words as well ! All the best , Susan :)
Date: 11/5/2021 4:28:00 PM
That's quite a work Susan. Certainly PODT material and more! Best - Ken
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:54:00 AM
Ken, Thank you for your visit and your lovely comments. I look forward to reading your poems ! All the best, Susan :)
Date: 11/5/2021 2:16:00 PM
Susan, those three months away sure seem to pay: Congratulations on crafting a masterpiece for Poem of the Day! Hey, Hey! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/6/2021 8:52:00 AM
I love your words and rhyme and heart Gershon !! Thank you . Have a wonderful day . All the best , Susan :)
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