Home » Poems » Susan Lawrence » Inner Cosmos

Inner Cosmos

Your feathered words arrive tickling my ears
The tip of your nose brushes
The back of my neck
My skin awakens

I have been calling you
Calling you back into my consciousness
My heart 
My soul

Speak to me.... let me hear you
Your deep voice
Your warm breath
I feel you on my cheeks

Memories of our times together
Dancing in the raindrops
Naked...laughing
Warm pink drops
Cascading through the canopy of
A million greens above us

Sunlight seeping through
A kaleidoscope throwing rays of light
Shafts and shadows embracing your form
Noir velvet and gold shimmer
An ethereal statue before me

Sitting cross legged on mammoth leaves
We press our palms together 
Looking into your eyes 
Past now...to before
And back to now again
A forever embrace cradled in unity

Overhead the drip drop melody of 
A thousand tears
Falling from the heavens 
Audible in form
We have been here before 
Surrounded in green majesty

Gazing towards a swaying tribe of ladybugs
Red with black spots 
Surrounded in light...glowing 
Radiating love

I hover above you spread eagle
Close enough to caress your forehead 
With my lips
Leaving a gentle imprint
A message of hope

Fly with me to the clouds
Where we may gallop and play
Frolicking through lush planetary fields

Fly now...ride on my white wings
Up....up ...up
Past turmoil and confusion
Tragedy and loss
Through the lavender veil
To cloudbursts and mist
Mystery and rebirth

Infinite space and distant time surround us
We gasp and giggle
Weightless vibrations inhabit us

Turning towards each other in delight
We cartwheel through the sky
And make snow angels 
On the hills of magenta clouds

beautyblessingcelebrationfantasyimageryfree verse

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2022 2:42:00 PM

Isn't it nice to dream about being on a cloud. I enjoyed your creative lines penned in this one. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/21/2022 11:07:00 AM

Sara, A very belated thanks for your visit and comments ! Hugs and all good wishes. Susan :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/6/2022 3:00:00 PM

Romantic dances in the raindrops, and enchanting cartwheels through clouds, Wonderful write Susan

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/8/2022 6:49:00 AM

Hi Joseph ! Thank you for your visit ! So happy you could join me on this journey. All the best to you , Susan :)

Anil Deo

Date: 3/21/2022 9:03:00 AM

Your poems seem to blend yoga, meditation, and Nature's gentle colors and healings. ThanX. PTL

Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/29/2022 9:48:00 AM

Hi Anil, Thank you for the insight and lovely comment . Best to you , Susan :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/27/2022 8:35:00 AM

What a lovely and memorable moment of togetherness in blissful love and romance ! Unlike ordinary love poems with cliched images and metaphors, this stands out . Wonderful write and it goes into my FAV. Susan

Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/27/2022 3:27:00 PM

Valsa, In gratitude for your visit, comments and Fav ! Thank you . I am happy we could journey together in this poem . Hugs, Susan :)

Ann Peck

Date: 2/22/2022 4:38:00 PM

So lovely, Susan. "sunlight seeping through a kaleidoscope..." "through the lavender veil to cloudburst and mist" Those lines especially got me. Just a lovely pen throughout :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/23/2022 10:21:00 AM

Dear Ann , Thank you for your visit and grateful for your presence. Blessings, Susan :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/13/2022 4:26:00 AM

This is a really beautiful poem and one to be revisited often. I especially liked, “ Cascading through the canopy of A million greens above us”, & “ Surrounded in green majesty. Best, SuZ

Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/16/2022 6:53:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and lovely comments SuZ . Happy to journey with you. Cheers , Susan :)

Anil Deo

Date: 1/7/2022 10:12:00 AM

Your pen has an ethereal quality & supply of myriad colors. Cosmos gets me paying attention. You and All of us AND THE UNIVERSE make a singular, essential expression. Peace

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/8/2022 9:09:00 AM

Peace to you Anil . Happy you could join me on this journey. Thank you for your participation and comments. In gratitude, Susan :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/6/2022 10:33:00 AM

I was going to highlight my favorite parts so I could tell you what they were. I ended up highlighting almost the entire poem, so I put it on my FAVE list.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/7/2022 7:23:00 AM

Hi Caren, Thank you ! I am so very happy my poem moved you. Sending all good wishes for a wonderful new year. Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/20/2021 12:27:00 PM

Your "Inner Cosmos" is a beautiful write. A "Wonderful" story you told. Love It. Wish you would write more. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Susan Lawrence
Date: 12/21/2021 3:21:00 PM

Hi Paula . Thank you for your visit and comments . Blessings to you and yours . I posted a new poem today . Hugs, Susan :)

Poet Tellaferro

Date: 12/3/2021 2:41:00 PM

Powerful. Beautiful! Elegant! Ok, I bit back a tear or two. I am not easily moved. This avoids the cliches that make me choke on some RRRR ok most love poems. BUT it is awesome. LOVE IT! will be reading more. Did you mean "show" or snow angels, either way, it works...

Susan Lawrence
Date: 12/3/2021 10:47:00 PM

Hi Jehiel, So happy for your visit . I am thrilled my poem moved you. I appreciate your comments. A tear can be a good thing ! Thank you for pointing out the snow angels typo !!! Yes it is snow angels . I corrected it . Looking forward to reading your poems . Cheers, Susan :)

Ann Peck

Date: 11/26/2021 4:11:00 PM

Just beautiful! I especially loved ...and make snow angels on the hills of magenta clouds. It paints such a gorgeous sight.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/27/2021 5:42:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comments Ann . Much appreciated. Susan :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/17/2021 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your "Dark Lake" sale, but the buyer should have purchased, "After the Storm" with it! Aloha 'oe!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/17/2021 10:43:00 AM

yes !! Hugs, Susan :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/14/2021 9:50:00 PM

Oh this is so lovely, a poetic gem, dissevered POTD.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/17/2021 10:42:00 AM

Thank you dear Harry, Big hugs , Susan :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2021 2:16:00 AM

Your poetry is unique my friend, this one included, your imagery rocks and this poem is so tender and melancholy. I applaud you and congratulate you on your intense poem been chosen as POTD. You deserve the honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/17/2021 10:42:00 AM

Jennifer, So happy to have found you o the Soup. I appreciate your comments and support. I am happy we can soar together my friend! Hugs to you and all good wishes, Susan :)

John Watt

Date: 11/13/2021 5:36:00 PM

Susan, this journey through the clouds, sky, and planets is a lush dreamscape of nature, longing, beauty, joy, and romance, with a sprinkling of melancholy. It is tantalizing to dream of rising above the tumult and simply play in weightless flight with one you love. I love the lines, 'Cascading through the canopy of / A million greens above us', and 'Frolicking through lush planetary fields'. Your creations are always highly anticipated and this one comes straight from the heart and settles in the soul. A much enjoyed read, going in my faves, and warm congrats for your POTD honor. Hugs ~ John

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/17/2021 10:40:00 AM

Dear John, So happy for your visit and amazing comments and support. I am thrilled that we can journey together ! Hugs to you my friend. Looking forward to reading more of your magic. Susan :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/9/2021 11:33:00 PM

Aww, what an excellent exquisite write dear Susan...am so sorry for being here so late to congratulate you on your very well deserved POTD honor dear sweet friend...you are a very talented artist, and that creativity is seen in all your poems that are very RICH in imagery. Another poetic gem from you...BIG hugs...~ Ani

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:07:00 AM

Dear Ani my friend, Thank you for your light spirit and all the peace and love that you radiate. I am so grateful to have you on my journey and be able to share with you!Big hugs and love always, Susan :)

Priya Shaw

Date: 11/8/2021 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations!!! and enjoy the honour Susan! Best wishes!! Hugs... Priya.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Priya ! All the best, Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2021 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your very merited POTD award, Susan! Imagery and metaphor give us a delightful peek into your inner self. ~ Best regards // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:05:00 AM

Dear Paul, Thank you for your visit and your wonderful comments. I hug you ! All the best, Susan :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/8/2021 5:09:00 AM

An inner joy after each drop of your soulful words.. waves of a wonderful trance drifting the soul to your mysterious realm.. An "Inner Cosmos" of beauty and spirituality earned the honour and recognition of your dear fellow poets and friends! I join here to congratulate you, dear Susan, on the POTD acknowledgement! A true gem of rarity! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:02:00 AM

Dearest Besma, So much gratitude for your beautiful energy and words of appreciation. I always learn from your deep spiritual poems and I am so very happy to have you on my journey of the soul and all it reveals. Love and hugs to you my friend, Susan :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/7/2021 1:23:00 PM

Quite a good write and congrat's on your win.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/11/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thank you M.L.! All the best, Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/6/2021 5:13:00 AM

I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win. Well penned.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/6/2021 8:58:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda ! Happy to find you and your work . Best wishes to you, Susan :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/5/2021 10:07:00 PM

Susan, this is a lovely memorable peek into the cosmos. I love to write about the cosmos and love reading about it too. Congratulations on your deserving honor of POTD! Blessings xxoo

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/6/2021 8:57:00 AM

Dear Connie , Grateful for your visit, your comments and warm congratulations. I noticed you just wrote a cosmic poem … Can’t wait to read it ! Hugs and love, Susan :)