Inkubation
Your form is strong,
but your content is weak
Desire flowing,
experience meek
Trying to fake it
with meter and rhyme
Words never ripen
—green apples in time
(Dream Sleep: March, 2021)
Copyright © Kurt Philip Behm | Year Posted 2021
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