Ink me in stars

"My soul ceases to stroll ~
      in the ruffled leaves of lotus letters, 
                 whose paper sun
             has never surfed to your seabeds..." 
             
                                ~ quote by the poet. 


Say, I'll be the saviour-spell ...for your champagne stars, sinking in eyes eclipsed by cupid where orphans of daylight, dwell when I am nothing... but pain a puppet princess, dethroned I dream to be your heartbeat ...pearled in peace periwinkles when poetry is Psyche ...freckled in my fogged marrow and petals fall, pulse by pulse ink me feathered, in grape-golds if the hydra hymns forget to breathe my name in silence O' love, I'll bask ~ laced with lores healed in you...like a poem

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Date: 11/13/2024 11:49:00 AM
Hiya, congrats on your win in my contest, like your quote, like your poem, well done, love Constance
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Date: 11/5/2024 9:55:00 AM
Dear Hiya, soulful poetess, your vibrant imagery and vivid metaphors animate and awe the poetic page and touch deeply into my heart. Your creative verse stirs the body and soul so eloquently, so elegantly, "petals fall, pulse by pulse" and "O' love, I'll bask ~ laced with lores/healed in you...like a poem" - your poem is sumptuous! Your golden pen spills tender, beautiful, imaginative poetry my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/19/2024 11:25:00 AM
Quiet an emotional write Hiya, I'm not familiar with this form but from the other comments you've mastered it. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 10/14/2024 1:52:00 AM
Absolutely superb my dearest poet friend. I love it so much. Big congrats on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing this masterpiece and your exceptional poetic talent. Hugs
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Date: 10/13/2024 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Jueju is not an easy form but yours is seamless. Thanks for sharing your talent. Sara K
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Date: 10/11/2024 10:16:00 PM
Beautiful. congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Date: 10/10/2024 4:16:00 PM
Wow, this is a lovely poem. All the lines are lovely. Hard to pick certain ones...
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Date: 10/10/2024 1:36:00 PM
"if the hydra hymns forget to breath my name in silence O' love, I'll bask ~ laced with lores healed in you...like a poem" -- Very romantic, beautiful poetry. A writer giving way to her heart, divine expression.
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Date: 10/9/2024 8:20:00 AM
Wow. Beautiful writing! Excellent :)
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Date: 10/9/2024 12:27:00 AM
You have penned a deep, complex and emotional poem Hiya, with almost Shakespearian ring to it, with multifarious and multifaceted aspects. Thank you for sharing. Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/8/2024 10:31:00 PM
There is a love pattern in this challenging poem. Pulse by pulse you build a poem that is great in conception. Great alliteration.
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:36:00 PM
Oh like a poem let thine heart be healed and let thy soul be saved, for only poetry can do this amazing thing for you Hiya, excellency at its best here,!
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Date: 10/8/2024 1:36:00 PM
Precious poetry Hiya and in a form I'm unfamiliar with. My fave stanza is the second one. When we're at our nadir a savior can make all the difference
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Date: 10/8/2024 11:56:00 AM
A pretty picture of love from a devotee who seems to feel worthless. That doesn't mean it doesn't work. Relationships -to each his own. I love the metaphors. There is strong emotion and feeling in this poem. It is outstanding for such courage.
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Date: 10/8/2024 11:46:00 AM
A real nice love poem. Due to my limited vocabulary, I usually get a google translation of your poems. Even in simple English the poem is so beautiful. my recommendation for next POTD.
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