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Inhaling Nature

Alone I revel in nature’s splendor Biding my time without daily worries intruding Can I remain here forever? Daydreams assure me I may Even though time seems to stand still For I am at peace Gusts of wind brush across the creek Hair is tousled, yet it matters not I choose to inhale the fresh air without care Joyfully taking pleasure in my repose Keeping my mind occupied by writing Little letters, describing the finery of the surrounding forest Musings they are Notes of thanks to Mother Nature On a sheet of finest calfskin, stolen from Grandpa’s desk Parchment I inscribe slowly in script Quill used as my pen, recalling communications of yesteryear Rest is effortless on such a day Smiling, I watch dusk overcome the sun Taking a luminous glow from the sky Until long shadows of sentinel trees are cast Very slowly a thunderstorm forms to the south Will St. Francis hear my whisper? Xavier, indeed, recruits a companion Young spotted owl escorts me safely home ZZZs of sleep reflect my tranquility

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Date: 5/24/2021 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative write. Love It. The Abecedarian poems take time and work. Good for you. Have a blessed day/week................
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:36:00 PM
I've never tried an abecedarian poem. This is wonderful, Carolyn! congrats on your 1st place win in Chantelle's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 9/23/2014 12:02:00 PM
Excellent poetry. Just exactly what I needed this hot evening. Thanks for the share
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:55:00 PM
Shadow will love this one. I do know. GL in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 8/25/2014 5:54:00 PM
From top to bottom, this one ROCKS. A very well done ABC poem. I just have so little time these days and I know to do this one will take a lot of devotion. I congratulate you early. This for sure is a winner.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/25/2014 7:57:00 PM
It was really not difficult at all. I just had to concentrate. Thanks, Andrea
Date: 8/24/2014 11:38:00 AM
what a beautiful write, dear Carolyn - especially love the St Francis Xavier part
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:14:00 AM
O, Carolyn. you have done it. A perfect Abecedarian with a nice flow . I diud one but not so happy about it.
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Date: 8/23/2014 4:21:00 AM
A soul in harmonious coexistence with mother nature. What more St. Francis would pray for? A melody of a writing that captivates the soul and makes it to want to sing!
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Date: 8/22/2014 1:51:00 PM
Simply stunning with brilliant imagery. Carolyn i do hope this does well in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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