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Inhale To Breathe Out

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See truth in lying, love in hate Hurt in happy, early in late Eat sweet hot sugar Salty savoury food Eat licking while kissing Tongue teasingly glued Hear tears in hiding, hate in love Pain in placate, bummed-out in above Breath air into lifeless Inhale to breathe out Kiss sight into eyeless Breathe soft and real loud Come find my arms open Come see my eyes smile Feel how you're unbroken Stay whole for a while *** April 29, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/2/2017 6:21:00 AM

Wonderful Piroet. I needed that today :) xomo! Sevens.

Darren White
Date: 5/2/2017 7:20:00 AM

Ton Piroet t'aime :) Thank you, ma mo:)

Phillip Garcia

Date: 4/30/2017 2:35:00 PM

Hear tears in hiding & kiss sight eyeless are winning poems on their own. For a second I thought it might be an acrostic because the first 4 lines say "shes" but then I remembered. This is top-notch D-Dub. All the words serve a purpose and well together.

Darren White
Date: 4/30/2017 2:42:00 PM

Thank you Phillip! Hehe about that acrostic, I hadn't even noticed that :) Glad you like my poem.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/30/2017 11:47:00 AM

I have no words.... Yes I do (lol) This entry must be read out loud slowly and with expression......

Darren White
Date: 4/30/2017 11:53:00 AM

Do it, Lisa. Read out loud :)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/30/2017 9:25:00 AM

love in hate, hate in love...float away my precious dove...we need one another to keep us together

Darren White
Date: 4/30/2017 9:35:00 AM

Yes Tim, that, exactly that. All the conrtoversies in the world and in ourselves. We need each other to keep us together :)

Sara Ella

Date: 4/30/2017 8:46:00 AM

A very lovely poem to start the day <3 The title line is perfect - as is the poem :)

Darren White
Date: 4/30/2017 9:36:00 AM

Thank you my sweet friend :) <3

White Wolf

Date: 4/30/2017 3:54:00 AM

A breath of fresh air! A great write, Duir!

Darren White
Date: 4/30/2017 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Budgie :)