Bob Quigley Poet Rhyme

Infidelity

Whispers in a darkened room
Two bodies locked in passions dance
Lust and longing both consume
Exploring hands enhance

Sacred vows lie on the floor
Discarded with their clothes
Craving love, they search for more
Trust lost in the throes

Sated bodies, guilty hearts
Have failed to fill the void
 Did they really just make love
Or was it just destroyed

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Black Eyed Susan February 25, 2012 at 5:30 PM Really loved this poem from the moment I saw it. I forgot to fav it so i''m faving it now. LOVE the ending :) Bob Quigley February 26, 2012 at 7:58 AM Thank you Susan. I really appreciate that.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2011 at 5:48 AM A belated congratulations I am sending you this morning for your 1st Place win in Susan's "Cheater, Cheater" contest Bob. Love, Carol Bob Quigley November 7, 2011 at 10:36 AM Thanks so much Carol

Roxanna Johnson November 5, 2011 at 4:05 PM A much deserved win! i wish i wrote this good (: im impressed :) congrats! Bob Quigley November 5, 2011 at 10:32 PM I appreciate your kind words Roxanna. Thank you

Carolyn Devonshire November 5, 2011 at 12:30 PM There's a big difference between having sex and making love, Bob. Beautifully written poem. Congrats on taking first place! Love, Carolyn Bob Quigley November 5, 2011 at 2:09 PM Thank you Carolyn

Edward Ebbs November 5, 2011 at 9:54 AM Very nice congrats! Bob Quigley November 5, 2011 at 9:58 AM Thanks much Ed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 5, 2011 at 7:07 AM Congrats Bob on a super first place win luv.. Bob Quigley November 5, 2011 at 8:56 AM Thank you Linda-Marie Bob Quigley November 5, 2011 at 8:55 AM

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2011 at 8:35 PM wow,that last stanza rocks!! Kind of like the one I wrote (the message of it!). Congrats on your win, Bob. Bob Quigley November 4, 2011 at 10:12 PM Definitely some similarities. Thanks for your comments Andrea

Joyce Johnson November 4, 2011 at 5:20 PM Great win Bob. Congratulations. Wonderful entry. Love, Joyce Bob Quigley November 4, 2011 at 10:11 PM I appreciate that Joyce

Valerie Sherman November 4, 2011 at 1:37 PM Terrific!!!Great win..Valerie Bob Quigley November 4, 2011 at 2:17 PM Thank you Valerie

Gwendolen Song October 25, 2011 at 9:04 AM I am going with.....D-E_S_T_R_O_Y_E_D!.... A great write, Bob. Killerific! Gwendolen Bob Quigley October 25, 2011 at 9:42 AM Thank you Gwendolen