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Inferior Bite

His banana small, inferior bite, Appealed not to her in the least that night. Her cantaloupes robust. He tried for the best thrust. The hippiness hype just couldn’t make it right.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative Limerick write. Have a great day.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2023 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:33:00 AM

LOL. Angle of the dangle they say... Congratulations Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2023 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, Linda!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 4:47:00 PM

Kim, funny and bawdy, congratulations on your winning placement!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2023 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Tania! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/1/2023 11:35:00 AM

Excellent plus Pangie xx I knew it was not you)))

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2023 4:05:00 PM

Tom Woody

Date: 8/31/2023 1:27:00 PM

Hmmm...this isn't the Kim I know

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2023 3:50:00 PM

LOL…they needed a fruity limerick so I wrote one…your right, not me per se…however :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2023 9:09:00 AM

Whoa!! A big problem or maybe it was only a minute one. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 4:45:00 PM

Thank you…lol

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/30/2023 6:35:00 AM

If it ain't there, even a toupee won't fix the route of the problem. Genus play on words. Love it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2023 8:57:00 PM

I fail to see the humor in this --- but I sure can taste it! lol. Whoa, girl!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:15:00 AM

LOL!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/29/2023 7:51:00 PM

Giggles Galore! <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:15:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen…lol!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/29/2023 10:50:00 AM

Lololol ouch

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 1:16:00 PM

LOL