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Infectious Bar Floozy

Boozy
Oozy
Woozy
Floozy
Drug injected, boozy, oozy, Miss.
Flu infected, woozy, floozy kiss.



Written 1/20/18
Contest:  Write Me a Tyburn
Hosted by:  Kim Rodrigues

addictiondarkdrughealthhumortyburn

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Gregory Richard Barden

February 15, 2018 at 9:20 PM

Oh, this is charming, Rhoda, and for me, right up there with Luloo's ... wonderful Tyburn, Friend! Congrats! :-) <3

Rhoda Tripp

February 15, 2018 at 11:07 PM

Thank you so much, Friend. Your kindness charms me. I am humbled.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 3, 2018 at 12:55 PM

Back with congrats!! My personal favourite ;P xomo!

Rhoda Tripp

February 3, 2018 at 11:53 PM

Awww...thank you, Maureen.

Jean Murray

February 2, 2018 at 1:34 PM

How romantic! Well done.

Rhoda Tripp

February 3, 2018 at 12:32 AM

Lol. Jean. You make me grin. Thank you.

John Gondolf

February 2, 2018 at 7:16 AM

Rhoda, back to say congrats for your win, well done!

Rhoda Tripp

February 3, 2018 at 12:32 AM

Thank you, John. Your kindness means a lot to me.

Eve Roper

February 1, 2018 at 8:42 PM

Back with big congratulations on this great piece , Rhoda :)

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:29 PM

Thank you, Eve. I've been away from soup writing so this was a nice surprise to see.

Line Gauthier

February 1, 2018 at 8:08 PM

LOL - great one, Rhoda. Awesome rhythm and style. Congrats on your win.

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:29 PM

Thank you, Line. I'm humbled.

Andrea Dietrich

February 1, 2018 at 7:57 PM

this was one of my favorites. Congrats for your win, Rhoda.

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:32 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I apologize for my absence. I've been working on a long piece. Maybe I'll post a chapter to get opinions.

Sandra Haight

February 1, 2018 at 6:46 PM

Really funny, Rhoda! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Sandra

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:32 PM

Thank you very much Sandra

Curtis Moorman

February 1, 2018 at 6:00 PM

I think the guy I saw in the alley barfing his guts out had just spent an evening with the lady in question. Still a great write for a difficult form.

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:33 PM

Lol. Thank you, Curtis. Apologize for my absence as of late. I'll make it back around.

Viv Wigley

February 1, 2018 at 4:58 PM

Well done, Rhoda, allow me to pass you a box of tissues x

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:35 PM

Lol, Viv. You may think it's green but it's snot. (a little play on words there) Thanks for coming around. I'll try to be a little more active here in the next week or so.

Paul Callus

February 1, 2018 at 3:31 PM

Pleased to return with congratulations on your merited podium finish, Rhoda! Well done! Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:36 PM

Thank you, Paul. I've found a good mentor in you.

Tom Cunningham

February 1, 2018 at 3:13 PM

Well done Rhoda Regards Tom

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:37 PM

Thank you, Tom. Couldn't do it without the support and friendship of people like you.

Kim Rodrigues

February 1, 2018 at 2:22 PM

Congrats on 2nd place, Rhoda!

Rhoda Tripp

February 1, 2018 at 11:38 PM

Thank you so much, Kim. I feel both humbled and honored.

Edward Mccall

January 28, 2018 at 5:45 PM

Too funny Rhoda, just too funny. :-) :-)

Rhoda Tripp

January 30, 2018 at 8:22 PM

Thank you, Edward. Sorry I've been so absent. Been working on my suspense/thriller.

Richard Lamoureux

January 25, 2018 at 9:07 AM

Very cool and humorous.

Rhoda Tripp

January 25, 2018 at 6:01 PM

Thank you, Dear Rick.

FJ Thomas

January 25, 2018 at 8:52 AM

LOL EWWW RHODA! I needed a laugh today and you and Jan came through. Thank you!

Rhoda Tripp

January 25, 2018 at 6:00 PM

Hi Shadow. Glad I could make you laugh. I, personally, wanted to vomit. Lol. But yeah, I tried for humor so I'm honored it came across that way to you. Success! Thanks for stopping in and for your support.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

January 23, 2018 at 6:21 AM

Pissy powerful gut hurl this Tyburn poem be, Rhoda! This most definitely is a straight-up non-sober floozy. Great write. Love and hugs always.

Rhoda Tripp

January 24, 2018 at 4:35 AM

Thank you, Freddie. I can't believe I wrote this as it made my own stomach roil. Thank you for visiting, Dear. Love and hugs in return.

Paul Callus

January 22, 2018 at 11:15 AM

Hey..this is not fair! I was the first to comment on this humorous Tyburn, Rhoda, and now I find that my comment has disappeared!! You make this awkward, restrictive form look easy. gl in the contest:) Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

January 22, 2018 at 12:11 PM

I'm sorry, Paul. I remember you commented. I don't know wtf happened. You're a Dearheart. Now I wonder where my other 23 comments on this poem went. Lol. Thanks for your support, my Dearheart.

Eve Roper

January 22, 2018 at 9:33 AM

This is brilliant, Rhoda, you made me smile:) Hugs Eve

Rhoda Tripp

January 22, 2018 at 5:48 PM

Lol. That's great, Eve. Glad I could make you smile. Thank you for your support of my writing.

John Fleming

January 22, 2018 at 3:07 AM

My goodness, Rhoda! I am not surprised in the very slightest at the sub-title -- the verse certainly does make ones head spin! An incredibly powerful impression you have managed to create here with such a few words...I am very impressed at the overall impact it makes -- I actually felt giddy reading it! Very cleverly penned, Rhoda. My very warmest regards. :) john

Rhoda Tripp

January 22, 2018 at 5:47 PM

Thank you so very much, John, for gracing my account with you kind words of encouragement. Glad you enjoyed this Tyburn form. First time I've heard of it or tried it and it was interesting and fun. Hugs, John.

John Lawless

January 21, 2018 at 1:15 PM

a double dose of aftermath....interesting take on the form....worked very well

Rhoda Tripp

January 21, 2018 at 4:58 PM

Lol. Thank you, John. Much appreciated.

James Swartz

January 21, 2018 at 8:19 AM

Very awesome write Rhoda! Very descriptive and oozes with creative. This reminds me of my youth when i may not have dismissed her and paid the price later. Now in my more mature years i know the difference.

Rhoda Tripp

January 21, 2018 at 10:28 AM

Thank you, James. We all had our "stupid years" didn't we? Thank you, also, for being persistent about writing my book. You are a Dearheart.

Arthur Vaso

January 21, 2018 at 12:19 AM

Made me smile! :)

Rhoda Tripp

January 21, 2018 at 2:13 AM

Lol. Thanks, Arthur. Such a charmer I am, eh? Thanks for your kindness. Glad I could make you smile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 20, 2018 at 10:27 PM

Ah I love it!!! You knocked this one out of the park, I expect to see it on the winners list :) xomo my best to you Rhoda! xomo

Rhoda Tripp

January 20, 2018 at 10:44 PM

Thank you, Maureen. I'm humbled. It is a fun contest.

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2018 at 8:25 PM

hahaha. You guys around here are making these look easier than I thought. I only did one tyburn in my life and it was so hard for me. Way to go doing this one. It's REALLY good and funny.

Rhoda Tripp

January 20, 2018 at 10:43 PM

Andrea...I started first with the word 'naughty' and couldn't find enough rhyming words. With this one, I still had 'snoozy' in reserve. Lol. It's a fun contest and prompted me to try a new form so it's a winning situation either way. Thanks so much for your kindness and encouragement

Infectious Bar Floozy

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