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Infectious Bar Floozy

Boozy
Oozy
Woozy
Floozy
Drug injected, boozy, oozy, Miss.
Flu infected, woozy, floozy kiss.



Written 1/20/18
Contest:  Write Me a Tyburn
Hosted by:  Kim Rodrigues

Copyright © Rhoda Tripp | Year Posted 2018

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Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/15/2018 9:20:00 PM Oh, this is charming, Rhoda, and for me, right up there with Luloo's ... wonderful Tyburn, Friend! Congrats! :-) <3 Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/15/2018 11:07:00 PM Thank you so much, Friend. Your kindness charms me. I am humbled.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 2/3/2018 12:55:00 PM Back with congrats!! My personal favourite ;P xomo! Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/3/2018 11:53:00 PM Awww...thank you, Maureen.

Jean Murray Date: 2/2/2018 1:34:00 PM How romantic! Well done. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/3/2018 12:32:00 AM Lol. Jean. You make me grin. Thank you.

John Gondolf Date: 2/2/2018 7:16:00 AM Rhoda, back to say congrats for your win, well done! Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/3/2018 12:32:00 AM Thank you, John. Your kindness means a lot to me.

Eve Roper Date: 2/1/2018 8:42:00 PM Back with big congratulations on this great piece , Rhoda :) Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:29:00 PM Thank you, Eve. I've been away from soup writing so this was a nice surprise to see.

Line Gauthier Date: 2/1/2018 8:08:00 PM LOL - great one, Rhoda. Awesome rhythm and style. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:29:00 PM Thank you, Line. I'm humbled.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/1/2018 7:57:00 PM this was one of my favorites. Congrats for your win, Rhoda. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:32:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. I apologize for my absence. I've been working on a long piece. Maybe I'll post a chapter to get opinions.

Sandra Haight Date: 2/1/2018 6:46:00 PM Really funny, Rhoda! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Sandra Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:32:00 PM Thank you very much Sandra

Curtis Moorman Date: 2/1/2018 6:00:00 PM I think the guy I saw in the alley barfing his guts out had just spent an evening with the lady in question. Still a great write for a difficult form. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:33:00 PM Lol. Thank you, Curtis. Apologize for my absence as of late. I'll make it back around.

Viv Wigley Date: 2/1/2018 4:58:00 PM Well done, Rhoda, allow me to pass you a box of tissues x Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:35:00 PM Lol, Viv. You may think it's green but it's snot. (a little play on words there) Thanks for coming around. I'll try to be a little more active here in the next week or so.

Paul Callus Date: 2/1/2018 3:31:00 PM Pleased to return with congratulations on your merited podium finish, Rhoda! Well done! Regards // paul Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:36:00 PM Thank you, Paul. I've found a good mentor in you.

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/1/2018 3:13:00 PM Well done Rhoda Regards Tom Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:37:00 PM Thank you, Tom. Couldn't do it without the support and friendship of people like you.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/1/2018 2:22:00 PM Congrats on 2nd place, Rhoda! Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 2/1/2018 11:38:00 PM Thank you so much, Kim. I feel both humbled and honored.

Edward Mccall Date: 1/28/2018 5:45:00 PM Too funny Rhoda, just too funny. :-) :-) Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/30/2018 8:22:00 PM Thank you, Edward. Sorry I've been so absent. Been working on my suspense/thriller.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/25/2018 9:07:00 AM Very cool and humorous. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/25/2018 6:01:00 PM Thank you, Dear Rick.

FJ Thomas Date: 1/25/2018 8:52:00 AM LOL EWWW RHODA! I needed a laugh today and you and Jan came through. Thank you! Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/25/2018 6:00:00 PM Hi Shadow. Glad I could make you laugh. I, personally, wanted to vomit. Lol. But yeah, I tried for humor so I'm honored it came across that way to you. Success! Thanks for stopping in and for your support.

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/23/2018 6:21:00 AM Pissy powerful gut hurl this Tyburn poem be, Rhoda! This most definitely is a straight-up non-sober floozy. Great write. Love and hugs always. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/24/2018 4:35:00 AM Thank you, Freddie. I can't believe I wrote this as it made my own stomach roil. Thank you for visiting, Dear. Love and hugs in return.

Paul Callus Date: 1/22/2018 11:15:00 AM Hey..this is not fair! I was the first to comment on this humorous Tyburn, Rhoda, and now I find that my comment has disappeared!! You make this awkward, restrictive form look easy. gl in the contest:) Regards // paul Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/22/2018 12:11:00 PM I'm sorry, Paul. I remember you commented. I don't know wtf happened. You're a Dearheart. Now I wonder where my other 23 comments on this poem went. Lol. Thanks for your support, my Dearheart.

Eve Roper Date: 1/22/2018 9:33:00 AM This is brilliant, Rhoda, you made me smile:) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/22/2018 5:48:00 PM Lol. That's great, Eve. Glad I could make you smile. Thank you for your support of my writing.

John Fleming Date: 1/22/2018 3:07:00 AM My goodness, Rhoda! I am not surprised in the very slightest at the sub-title -- the verse certainly does make ones head spin! An incredibly powerful impression you have managed to create here with such a few words...I am very impressed at the overall impact it makes -- I actually felt giddy reading it! Very cleverly penned, Rhoda. My very warmest regards. :) john Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/22/2018 5:47:00 PM Thank you so very much, John, for gracing my account with you kind words of encouragement. Glad you enjoyed this Tyburn form. First time I've heard of it or tried it and it was interesting and fun. Hugs, John.

John Lawless Date: 1/21/2018 1:15:00 PM a double dose of aftermath....interesting take on the form....worked very well Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/21/2018 4:58:00 PM Lol. Thank you, John. Much appreciated.

James Swartz Date: 1/21/2018 8:19:00 AM Very awesome write Rhoda! Very descriptive and oozes with creative. This reminds me of my youth when i may not have dismissed her and paid the price later. Now in my more mature years i know the difference. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/21/2018 10:28:00 AM Thank you, James. We all had our "stupid years" didn't we? Thank you, also, for being persistent about writing my book. You are a Dearheart.

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/21/2018 12:19:00 AM Made me smile! :) Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/21/2018 2:13:00 AM Lol. Thanks, Arthur. Such a charmer I am, eh? Thanks for your kindness. Glad I could make you smile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 10:27:00 PM Ah I love it!!! You knocked this one out of the park, I expect to see it on the winners list :) xomo my best to you Rhoda! xomo Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/20/2018 10:44:00 PM Thank you, Maureen. I'm humbled. It is a fun contest.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2018 8:25:00 PM hahaha. You guys around here are making these look easier than I thought. I only did one tyburn in my life and it was so hard for me. Way to go doing this one. It's REALLY good and funny. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 1/20/2018 10:43:00 PM Andrea...I started first with the word 'naughty' and couldn't find enough rhyming words. With this one, I still had 'snoozy' in reserve. Lol. It's a fun contest and prompted me to try a new form so it's a winning situation either way. Thanks so much for your kindness and encouragement

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