Indivisible

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Shadorma
A Shadorma is of Spanish origin and consists of a 6 line stanza using the following syllable counts: 3/5/3/3/7/5. There is no rhyme scheme.

An angel that is Heaven sent, I love you more than life, and each day, I thank God for sending you to me. I adore the sound of your laugh, your sweet smile, your soft touch, and the way that you kiss me with passionate lips. We've become indivisible, forever linked as one; our hearts and souls conjoined we're inseparable. Without you life has no meaning, you're my light; but for you, darkness would engulf my soul for eternity.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/30/2022 2:06:00 AM

Happy Birthday my friend. This poem testifies to the beauty from within. It is profoundly romantic and exemplifies how two souls become one with loves purity. Please share this at PFT. Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2022 8:35:00 AM

Thanks, Connie, as always, I appreciate your comments,...and thanks for remembering my birthday, stay safe my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/29/2022 9:47:00 AM

Emile, you've written another beauty! I am not really familiar with this form, but it works so well with the theme you have chosen. Hoping both of you are over the COVID thing.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2022 11:09:00 AM

Thanks, Milit, as always, I appreciate your comments, we are feeling better every day now...and it's my birthday so I'm happy about that, stay safe my friend, Emile.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 4/29/2022 8:08:00 AM

very nice, works really well with the form

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2022 11:06:00 AM

Thanks, Jeff, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.