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Indisposed

-Folly in Grin-

Sleeping troubadour
Ask his ink why he slumber
Or his papyrus
Words they themselves would forget
Since their lord is indisposed

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Gary Watkins

December 8, 2013 at 7:00 PM

Very nice. I like the use of personification in this piece. Well done.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

December 8, 2013 at 7:25 PM

Thanks for the visit, Gary.

Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 11:27 AM

Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

Donna Jones

July 1, 2013 at 9:00 PM

Enjoyed this again AO...Congratulations

Seren Roberts

June 29, 2013 at 11:11 PM

Congrats A.O.....Seren

Karen Anglesey

June 29, 2013 at 4:12 PM

Very deep an moving with the picture of lost words .

Skat A

June 29, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Andulhafeez, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 29, 2013 at 5:41 PM

Thanks for my placement. I'll check your blog to see my spot and who made it to your list. Peace and love to you too. AO

Jack Horne

June 29, 2013 at 3:19 PM

lovely write - congrats on your wins : )

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 29, 2013 at 2:48 PM

Thanks everyone for dropping by. I'm grateful.

Elai Cee

June 28, 2013 at 10:46 AM

aha! what a piece...

Adarsh Raj

June 25, 2013 at 10:06 AM

Witty...loved it...:):):):)Adarsh

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2013 at 8:04 AM

I love this piece, you have skills my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2013 at 12:27 AM

hey, this is very clever and unique!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

June 24, 2013 at 5:29 PM

Perfect TANKA construction... exceptional word use... to me there is a mystical feel to the piece. Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

Donna Jones

June 24, 2013 at 9:40 AM

I also enjoyed this clever write...making me smile...wonderful job...thank you

Poet Destroyer A

June 24, 2013 at 9:14 AM

Abdulhafeez, I enjoyed reading your tanka. a clever and wise message... he is the all mighty, that is why!. xox~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

June 24, 2013 at 9:12 AM

Good morning My sweet friend,,, miss coming around here.. thank you for the warm smile your visit gave.. :-)

Carrie Richards

June 24, 2013 at 8:53 AM

Your poems so unique.......the words you choose so exceptional !! Wonderfully well done!

Sara Kendrick

June 24, 2013 at 8:06 AM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Very uniquely created work..Thanks for the visit to my work and taking time to leave a comment..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

June 24, 2013 at 7:28 AM

wonderful choices of word make this exceptional Shadow x smiles

Eileen Manassian

June 24, 2013 at 7:14 AM

:) Quite mystical this! :) I like the mix of words here, A.O.... Thanks for your visits to my work! I appreciate it! :) PS...I'm never indisposed for a visit! :)