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Indisposed

-Folly in Grin- Sleeping troubadour Ask his ink why he slumber Or his papyrus Words they themselves would forget Since their lord is indisposed

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Gary Watkins

Date: 12/8/2013 7:00:00 PM

Very nice. I like the use of personification in this piece. Well done.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/8/2013 7:25:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Gary.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

Donna Jones

Date: 7/1/2013 9:00:00 PM

Enjoyed this again AO...Congratulations

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/29/2013 11:11:00 PM

Congrats A.O.....Seren

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/29/2013 4:12:00 PM

Very deep an moving with the picture of lost words .

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:36:00 PM

Andulhafeez, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/29/2013 5:41:00 PM

Thanks for my placement. I'll check your blog to see my spot and who made it to your list. Peace and love to you too. AO

Jack Horne

Date: 6/29/2013 3:19:00 PM

lovely write - congrats on your wins : )

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/29/2013 2:48:00 PM

Thanks everyone for dropping by. I'm grateful.

Elai Cee

Date: 6/28/2013 10:46:00 AM

aha! what a piece...

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/25/2013 10:06:00 AM

Witty...loved it...:):):):)Adarsh

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2013 8:04:00 AM

I love this piece, you have skills my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2013 12:27:00 AM

hey, this is very clever and unique!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/24/2013 5:29:00 PM

Perfect TANKA construction... exceptional word use... to me there is a mystical feel to the piece. Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

Donna Jones

Date: 6/24/2013 9:40:00 AM

I also enjoyed this clever write...making me smile...wonderful job...thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2013 9:14:00 AM

Abdulhafeez, I enjoyed reading your tanka. a clever and wise message... he is the all mighty, that is why!. xox~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2013 9:12:00 AM

Good morning My sweet friend,,, miss coming around here.. thank you for the warm smile your visit gave.. :-)

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/24/2013 8:53:00 AM

Your poems so unique.......the words you choose so exceptional !! Wonderfully well done!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2013 8:06:00 AM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Very uniquely created work..Thanks for the visit to my work and taking time to leave a comment..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/24/2013 7:28:00 AM

wonderful choices of word make this exceptional Shadow x smiles

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/24/2013 7:14:00 AM

:) Quite mystical this! :) I like the mix of words here, A.O.... Thanks for your visits to my work! I appreciate it! :) PS...I'm never indisposed for a visit! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2013 6:38:00 AM

Another fine piece.

Joseph May

Date: 6/24/2013 6:33:00 AM

great tanka AO....best wishes