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there thrums a void I can't discern the pounding echos thru my chest this hollow, empty, longing breast it beats and beats but will not burn how does a pulsing 'neath my skin keep perfect tempo all these years so coursing blood from toes to ears and working wonders deep within? how does an organ keep employed SO much work while staying strong yet make me feel, emote, and long for things and people I've enjoyed? how could it be my fist-sized heart can wield twelve megatons of love while joined with others like a glove though beating half-a-world apart? how can it be that hearts of gold can be debased with just a word and twist with malice, undeterred on one sad lie that it's been sold? how is it that one change-of-heart can make such difference in a life embracing loves instead of strife through kind examples set apart? why is it that a heart's remade by one kind act of love or grace or just ONE smile upon the face of someone who has come to aid? hearts are more than just a beat they find their work in ALL we do while plied in loving, false or true of others, kindred, cold or sweet. a heart of hearts can take us far yet, even pumping, often breaks and how my own so dearly aches to feel the burn and know a scar. oh then I had true flames, thereof but now a void where once, desire as tears doused, long ago, the fire and all the heartbeats giv'n to love. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Pick A Title, Volume 9 - Enclosed Rhyme" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/30/2019 4:40:00 PM
So many things the heart does, and so many ways it influences us and our life, well done dear poet!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, I greatly appreciate the kind words, my friend ... really pleased you like this one. Blessings, Bro! :o)
Date: 9/30/2019 10:06:00 AM
Beautiful, Greg. Suitable for a quiet meditation.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:24:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Sunlite - what a sweet comment! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 9/30/2019 8:50:00 AM
You have written a wonderful entry and I'm sure it's a winner. So "poetic" and beautifully done. You're so talented. Blessings
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:26:00 PM
You are so very kind to me, Regina, and I'm very thankful for your sincere wishes and comments ... blessings to you, my friend! :o) <3

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