Indifference

Through the silence of the years
Time tiptoes in each small story
Another morning wakes with gentle glory
Too quickly, pass the years, ...it is clear

Around me and everywhere I look
Time slips and slides, so close upon the slopes
With mists upon the distant hills....our hopes
Are dwindled down to one small book

Ticking loudly, as down the ridge I climb
Echoes of the time, casting shadows grey
Narrowed down to waning days
A world of clocks, unwinding time

Uncaring clocks, to hear the sound, can be quite hard
Each minute, one by one, ticks-ticks-ticks my life away
The face of time, indifferent, without care, never strikes a last ballet
But, simply carries on, and will tick on, with no regard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/27/2012 7:09:00 PM
To my fav's and a 7 I'd like to see you mark the stresses in this one your meter is good here!Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:50:00 AM
pressed for time but read your superb piece, carrie .. a generic message of delightful cheers for your top win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/25/2012 2:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2012 9:58:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to morning Carrie. Thoroughly enjoyed. Felt like I was there. Congratulations
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2010 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen's contest "Lights Out". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:42:00 AM
just peachy I love the sounds the smells I miss this most in many verse...we get stuck in our eyeballs but not you! CONGRAD's
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your wonderful write and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2010 2:27:00 PM
o sorry carrie! o almost wrote your name on carols poem also this is like the fifth time i do this! lol
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Date: 7/21/2010 2:24:00 PM
lovely sonnet carol c: love the flow of it congrats!
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:02:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Lights Out contest.. another winning piece from your gifted pen my friend.. with luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:30:00 AM
Fantastic title to complement the all inclusive parody- Congrats to you Carrie
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:51:00 PM
I think you did a really awesome entry. I sure missed a lot of these along the way and saw several that were really good just now. congratulations on being in the top ten. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:03:00 AM
I am happy to share 10th with such a great poet and poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:49:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Parody contest with another great write.. enjoy another great win dear...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/5/2010 2:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for the support
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:15:00 PM
Interesting... I just looked up the word parody in the dictionary this morning. Your poem is such an awesome example of a parody. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Good luck in the contest. And I love the last two line of your parody... especially, lets drink th morning air. Love, Susan
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Date: 5/12/2010 10:31:00 PM
Awesome write! Even the sounds of the city sound quite poetic in your write. Good luck in the contest, Carrie and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/11/2010 2:06:00 PM
I was glad to see Doc with a contest of Parody's. I think they're overlooked. This is an exceptional poem that is true to life and has some really nice imagery. Good Luck! RAY
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Date: 5/10/2010 11:00:00 PM
Great work Carrie. Another winner. Thank you for your comments. love, Joyce
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Date: 5/10/2010 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:32:00 PM
Wonderful Carrie and a great entry into Dr. Ram's first contest... I can see u with another win easily ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/10/2010 3:47:00 PM
An exhilerating feeling springs from this poem, Carrie. Well done! Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2010 3:27:00 PM
Great write Carrie!!! always Michael
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