Berteena Harmony Of The Soul Poet Free verse

Indescribable

I’m going to write
the unfathomable 
so that when you
try to figure out 
the unimaginable
you won’t have a clue
who I really am
because no one else
can fit in my shoes.



Berteena
Harmony of the soul
06 February, 2019

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Charles Messina February 13, 2019 at 8:31 PM We all walk in our own shoes, Berteena. It is the ones who try to wear ours that usual end up tripping in their tracks (lol) Love the spirit in this. Great little write...keep penning! Charlie :) Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 13, 2019 at 9:14 PM Very true! Thanks so much! :) B

James Horn February 10, 2019 at 7:51 AM Shoes I wore would not fit, So wearing them I did quit; My strategy A tragedy; Wrote more poems must admit. Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 10, 2019 at 5:06 PM I have no rhyming couplets and no limerick. My free spirit flows with haiku and verse barefoot. Nice threading, dear one. ;)

Bobby May February 7, 2019 at 9:01 AM Well done Berteena! Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 1:02 AM Thanks so much, Bobby!

Robert Lindley February 7, 2019 at 8:23 AM The shoemaker told me my feet wee different- I readily agreed - one is left the other is right. Life is a mystery and your creation here expresses even further mystery of ink well flung. A fav.. thanks for this gift this fine morn.. Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 1:02 AM I love your dedication to motivation here. You are so sweet. Thanks!

Silent One February 7, 2019 at 5:14 AM You are right no one can fit in your shoes.. Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 1:01 AM You’ve got me smiling. Thanks so much! :)

Caren Krutsinger February 7, 2019 at 4:21 AM A secretive poem that leads me into a new imagination station. Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 12:27 AM You have such a way with words. You always motivate me to want to write more. Thank you, lovely one. <3

John Gondolf February 7, 2019 at 4:20 AM We are all unique and some very complex indeed. Nicely written, Berteena. Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 12:31 AM My favorite color is the pink-purple the sky turns when the sun sets. People always say I look good in blue. Thank you, dearest one. xx

Line Gauthier February 6, 2019 at 11:45 PM This is a gem, Berteena. Love it. Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 12:23 AM I found this one in the rough. Thank you! :)