Indescribable

I’m going to write the unfathomable so that when you try to figure out the unimaginable you won’t have a clue who I really am because no one else can fit in my shoes. Berteena Harmony of the soul 06 February, 2019

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Charles Messina

Date: 2/13/2019 8:31:00 PM

We all walk in our own shoes, Berteena. It is the ones who try to wear ours that usual end up tripping in their tracks (lol) Love the spirit in this. Great little write...keep penning! Charlie :)

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/13/2019 9:14:00 PM

Very true! Thanks so much! :) B

James Horn

Date: 2/10/2019 7:51:00 AM

Shoes I wore would not fit, So wearing them I did quit; My strategy A tragedy; Wrote more poems must admit.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/10/2019 5:06:00 PM

I have no rhyming couplets and no limerick. My free spirit flows with haiku and verse barefoot. Nice threading, dear one. ;)

Bobby May

Date: 2/7/2019 9:01:00 AM

Well done Berteena!

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/8/2019 1:02:00 AM

Thanks so much, Bobby!

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/7/2019 8:23:00 AM

The shoemaker told me my feet wee different- I readily agreed - one is left the other is right. Life is a mystery and your creation here expresses even further mystery of ink well flung. A fav.. thanks for this gift this fine morn..

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/8/2019 1:02:00 AM

I love your dedication to motivation here. You are so sweet. Thanks!