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Independence Day 2016

INDEPENDENCE DAY 2016 Are we truly independent? or have we become enmeshed overwhelmed by a desire. A desire to afford the luxury of independence to those unwilling to fight for it. Are we truly free? or have we been taken captive imprisoned by the impoverished. Chained to the needs of those who do not wish freedom but inclusion without duty. Are we still America? or an amalgam of multi-colored flags and visions. Tribal fiefdoms demanding sovereignty in the safety and sanctuary of independence and freedom. John G. Lawless 6/28/2016

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Date: 6/29/2016 8:41:00 AM
Nicely penned. All questions I've had. It doesn't look sustainable...
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Date: 6/28/2016 9:57:00 PM
John, your poem is a reflection of America today. It seems what we cherish about our nation is being eroded by infiltrators who loathe what we represent----a country representing a republic of the United States of America and freedom. ~ Sonia
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