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Independence

I saw my dreams in the mortar pounded And swift dripping from the brow of time I saw me white like cassava flour Ready to become anything on a hot grid Neither bitter nor sweet This lost of identity This making me into mere bread as sublime. So much is uprooted now The fat root that sucked the life from stone The leaves green and bronze like an Arawak The child shivering in the dawn Frightened, orphaned, and alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/20/2015 6:40:00 PM
L'Nass, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:35:00 AM
Excellent write - great imagery! Thank you for sharing this gem! Kindest regards!
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:14:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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