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Inconspicuous

I'm a whisper in the wind, shouting out, mocked by reality, I'm plagued by doubt, struggling to grasp what life is all about. Rendered inconspicuous as white noise; I've set aside hope, like yesterday's toys, what my heart harbors, my ego destroys. I'm a question posing as an answer; both a catalyst and an enhancer, I treat hypocrisy as a cancer.

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/5/2021 4:37:00 AM

Wonderful. Congrats. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2021 6:19:00 AM

Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/4/2021 10:21:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2021 6:19:00 AM

Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2021 11:02:00 AM

so good to read this again Emile, Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2021 6:20:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/4/2021 10:33:00 AM

Dear Emile, your creative talent shines in the clever beauty of your poem. Loved every rhyme, especially answer/enhancer. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest with this stunning piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2021 6:21:00 AM

Thanks so much, Susan, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/4/2021 10:18:00 AM

Hi Emile, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2021 10:26:00 AM

Thanks, Alexis, I appreciate it, have a good day my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/4/2021 9:02:00 AM

Emile, I am so pleased that this favorite of yours, so well-written, rose to a high place in my contest. Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/4/2021 12:21:00 PM

Same here, Emile. Folks often ask me to recite a poem, and I can never come up with a single one and I've written hundreds. Soup Mail.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2021 10:25:00 AM

Thanks so much, Milt, it was hard to come up with a favorite since once I write a poem it leaves my memory, forever free to wander through other minds, I can't remember a word without reading it, I appreciate all of the time, effort, and kindness you have shown me my friend, Emile.

Cari Rodriguez

Date: 8/2/2021 6:55:00 PM

Wow! I really connect with the way you write your poetry. "I’m a question, posing as an answer, both a catalyst and an enhancer" I'm just rapping this in my head. The flow. I love everything and cannot stop reading your stuff. Do you have a book(s) of these?? CB

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/3/2021 6:24:00 AM

Thank you so much, Cari, I appreciate your wonderful comments, I have 5 books on sale at Amason.com...just search for Emile Pinet and they will all show up...I also give a copy of my books as first prize in all my contest my friend, Emile.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/1/2018 2:57:00 AM

Congratulations, Emile on your great win with a wonderful verse.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/29/2018 9:21:00 AM

Congrats!!! my friend on your top win...Superbly done Emile...^WW^

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2018 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Very much, I appreciate your comment my friend, Emile.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/29/2018 7:24:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/28/2018 7:43:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Line, your visits are always most welcome my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2018 7:18:00 PM

super rhyme Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/28/2018 7:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/28/2018 6:05:00 PM

Congrats Emile on a number 1 win with this beauty, I knew it was a winner!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/28/2018 7:22:00 PM

Thanks John, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/24/2018 1:36:00 PM

I love poetic triplet rhyme schemes, this is outstanding Emile and it probably does sum up who you are in 9 lines or less...quite an accomplishment! I agree and disagree...hypocrisy is a cancer, but you Sir...are no mediocre poet!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/24/2018 2:15:00 PM

Thanks you so much John, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/24/2018 12:38:00 AM

Very clever, Emile. Well done.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/24/2018 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.