Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Inconspicuous

I'm a whisper in the wind, shouting out,
mocked by reality, I'm plagued by doubt,
struggling to grasp what life is all about.

Rendered inconspicuous as white noise
I set dreams aside, like yesterday's toys:
hopes my heart harbors, my ego destroys.

I'm a question, posing as an answer;
both a pragmatist and an enhancer;
I treat hypocrisy as a cancer.

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Regina Mcintosh August 5, 2021 at 4:37 AM Wonderful. Congrats. God bless you always, Love, Gina Emile Pinet August 5, 2021 at 6:19 AM Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Beata Agustin August 4, 2021 at 10:21 PM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Emile Pinet August 5, 2021 at 6:19 AM Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison August 4, 2021 at 11:02 AM so good to read this again Emile, Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet August 5, 2021 at 6:20 AM Thanks, Jan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley August 4, 2021 at 10:33 AM Dear Emile, your creative talent shines in the clever beauty of your poem. Loved every rhyme, especially answer/enhancer. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest with this stunning piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Emile Pinet August 5, 2021 at 6:21 AM Thanks so much, Susan, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y. August 4, 2021 at 10:18 AM Hi Emile, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis Emile Pinet August 4, 2021 at 10:26 AM Thanks, Alexis, I appreciate it, have a good day my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins August 4, 2021 at 9:02 AM Emile, I am so pleased that this favorite of yours, so well-written, rose to a high place in my contest. Congratulations! L Milton Hankins August 4, 2021 at 12:21 PM Same here, Emile. Folks often ask me to recite a poem, and I can never come up with a single one and I've written hundreds. Soup Mail. Emile Pinet August 4, 2021 at 10:25 AM Thanks so much, Milt, it was hard to come up with a favorite since once I write a poem it leaves my memory, forever free to wander through other minds, I can't remember a word without reading it, I appreciate all of the time, effort, and kindness you have shown me my friend, Emile.

Cari Rodriguez August 2, 2021 at 6:55 PM Wow! I really connect with the way you write your poetry. "I’m a question, posing as an answer, both a catalyst and an enhancer" I'm just rapping this in my head. The flow. I love everything and cannot stop reading your stuff. Do you have a book(s) of these?? CB Emile Pinet August 3, 2021 at 6:24 AM Thank you so much, Cari, I appreciate your wonderful comments, I have 5 books on sale at Amason.com...just search for Emile Pinet and they will all show up...I also give a copy of my books as first prize in all my contest my friend, Emile.

Subimal Sinha-Roy October 1, 2018 at 2:57 AM Congratulations, Emile on your great win with a wonderful verse. Emile Pinet October 1, 2018 at 8:18 AM Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Winged Warrior September 29, 2018 at 9:21 AM Congrats!!! my friend on your top win...Superbly done Emile...^WW^ Emile Pinet September 29, 2018 at 12:34 PM Thank you Very much, I appreciate your comment my friend, Emile.

Agnes Krampe September 29, 2018 at 7:24 AM Congrats on your win, Emile. Emile Pinet September 29, 2018 at 7:35 AM Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier September 28, 2018 at 7:43 PM Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Emile. Emile Pinet September 29, 2018 at 7:23 AM Thank you Line, your visits are always most welcome my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison September 28, 2018 at 7:18 PM super rhyme Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet September 28, 2018 at 7:22 PM Thanks Jan, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton September 28, 2018 at 6:05 PM Congrats Emile on a number 1 win with this beauty, I knew it was a winner!! Emile Pinet September 28, 2018 at 7:22 PM Thanks John, your support is greatly appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton September 24, 2018 at 1:36 PM I love poetic triplet rhyme schemes, this is outstanding Emile and it probably does sum up who you are in 9 lines or less...quite an accomplishment! I agree and disagree...hypocrisy is a cancer, but you Sir...are no mediocre poet! Emile Pinet September 24, 2018 at 2:15 PM Thanks you so much John, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier September 24, 2018 at 12:38 AM Very clever, Emile. Well done. Emile Pinet September 24, 2018 at 9:44 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.