Inappropriate

inappropriate humor of senility super-silly-ous not the super-serious first aid for friend and his wife

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2023 1:21:00 PM

I really like the word with silly you invented.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2023 3:25:00 PM

Thanks so much! My husband’s humor, seems is good for the soul!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/20/2023 2:54:00 AM

Old age is terrible, but we have to live through it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2023 3:25:00 PM

Hugs-a-million!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/19/2023 6:30:00 PM

Yes it happens frequently when one goes senile, part of aging I guess, it can be sad or laughable at times, nicely described :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2023 3:25:00 PM

Who knows…maybe it helps…but we still hate to think of ourselves that way.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/19/2023 4:42:00 PM

I like it! Nice Tanka, Kim. Sad, silly,and serious ... All are part of seeing or being senil. Inappropriate if our thoughts arn't kept to ourselves. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Write On! Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2023 5:33:00 PM

I appreciate you, Bill! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2023 1:45:00 PM

... super-serious is boring ... spice it up a bit ... :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2023 2:00:00 PM

Right…lol!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2023 7:39:00 AM

I shall soon be there...senile. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2023 7:57:00 AM

I don’t know…your writing is wonderful! xx