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In Vain

Bleakly human, Defined by imperfection, Haunted by generations of oppression From ourselves, But in vain. At the edge of the void, Inches away from the final step, Throwing memories, time, and love in, Desperate to fill the Nothing, But in vain. The black of light, The white of darkness, Infinitely entwined, enthroned, enraged, Blank, pallid faces scream out, With voices like the wind, whispering But in vain.
Inspired by "The Hollow Men" by T.S. Eliot For the Copy Cat Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/1/2012 10:16:00 AM
danny, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 3:19:00 PM
Great choice for the contest..Congrats on your winning work...Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Danny. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2012 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Danny. I remember reading TS Eliot's work back in college.
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:19:00 PM
wow, I agree with Suzette how you did Elliot justice and I don't think I even read Hollow Men before. But I sure enjoyed your imagery in this free verse poem. Congrats to you, my friend.
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Date: 8/27/2012 12:58:00 PM
a spectacular rendering of a difficult poet. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/20/2011 4:37:00 AM
Another breathtaking poem from you. Your poems seriously never fails to amaze and touch me :) Keep up the good work :D
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