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In Tune -120 Words

Where did my sweet muse go? she’s not here, I must know. I can't hear her I’m sad; my muse , best friend I had I can’t cope with this pain, there's too much on my brain. I feel so lost and hurt, to her I’d give my shirt. Why did she up and leave, now I sit and just grieve. I need to find her soon, we made such a good tune. I feel stuck in a pit, with no place left to sit. She left and took my sun, and I was shot with gun. I stay in my cold bed, and I feel so much dread. This is an all time low, Where did my sweet muse go? Contest:120 Words Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 2/14/2018 4:31:00 PM
Where is Alexis muse. COME BACK! Great job, that was sweet. Keep it up.
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Alexis! What a great write and one most of us can relate to ... that elusive muse :) ~Judy
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Date: 2/12/2018 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Alexis ... I enjoyed reading it ...
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Alexis, fantastic write.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2018 6:28:00 PM
It can be so frustrating as well when your muse has left. I have found myself in that situation. Great write.
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:13:00 PM
Good circular insightful poem, Alexis. That is the million dollar question most poets ask themselves at one time or another. Cool poem w/deep meaning. Love and best wishes always, my dear friend.
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:56:00 AM
Good way to beat the muse blues Alexis, congratulations on a fine win...
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:18:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win Top on this excellent composition.
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Date: 2/10/2018 8:13:00 PM
I really really like this one. I hope it placed high. Oh yes, I see below it DID. No wonder!! Congrats to you.
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Date: 2/10/2018 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on a much deserved 1st place win Alexis; Awesome!~Che :)
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Date: 2/10/2018 2:59:00 PM
Such a frustrating feeling indeed. But a beautiful piece deserving a win! Congrats Lexi ;)
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Date: 2/10/2018 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this well-written piece, Alexis! Janice
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:52:00 AM
congratulations for your win and again thank you for your kindness
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:58:00 AM
Hi Frederic, Thank you very much.You are most welcome:-)Alexis
Date: 2/10/2018 10:56:00 AM
My dear Alexis, please accept my very BIG congratulations for a top win which you so very much deserve! Excellent write, my friend! Best regards. Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:35:00 AM
For me very evocative! Congratulations on your 1st place Alexis! ;-)
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:58:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Alexis.
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Alexis, on your win ...to lose your muse is a terrible feeling and your poem captures that anxiety well my friend, Emile.
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:08:00 AM
Hi Alexis, just stopped back by to say congrats my dear poetic friend, nicely done! John
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Date: 2/10/2018 8:51:00 AM
Your muse seems perfectly fine to me Alexis, congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Alexis Y.
Date: 2/10/2018 9:01:00 AM
Hi Silent , Thank you so much . I appreciate my placement in your contest. I really enjoyed it and was quite the challenge:-) Alexis
Date: 2/8/2018 4:10:00 PM
Nice way to go about this contest, to allow the reader to have empathy for the loss of your muse...good luck poet and again thank you
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Date: 2/8/2018 8:25:00 AM
Well-done, Alexis--good for the contest! Janice
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Date: 2/7/2018 5:09:00 PM
Nicely written. Alexis, Good luck in the contest. I had hoped to write something for this but haven't had the time and the contest is filling up fast. John
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Alexis Y.
Date: 2/7/2018 5:13:00 PM
Hi John, Thank you so much for such a nice comment. I appreciate your continued support. I hope you come up with something soon. I look forward to seeing what you come up with:-) Alexis
Date: 2/7/2018 8:05:00 AM
Very nicely penned Alexis....GL in the contest..
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