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Poetry/Shape/In This Wild Forest, Unknown
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1553-939-13
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 13, 2023
For the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere No 1222
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/14/2023

Third Place

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* I am a tree growing wild in a rambling forest. Each day I reach my arms for the sky and feel the sun, the rain and the snow fall on me. On my branches birds have made nests, and sweet little birds chirp for a meal, please! Butterflies come to rest in the shade of my leaves, and I hear a rippling stream flowing in the distance. In the winter I go to sleep and dream of bees buzzing. of the rainbow flowers that will grow all around me in Spring. I wait quiet in the forest I am a tree, strong and weak, I have lived a hundred years in this forest, and have many stories to tell, if you listen. Press your ear on my trunk, you can hear my heart beating. I have a soul, if you cut me down I bleed. I pray that I will live a hundred more years- in this wild forest, unknown.

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Date: 6/14/2023 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance. Indeed the old growth trees have stories to tell if we will but listen and pray we learn their value. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/14/2023 11:39:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations and for the comment, blessings !
Date: 6/13/2023 12:52:00 PM
So lovely using the shape poem's creativity, Constance. And thanks so much for my win in your last contest.
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:48:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and you are welcome !
Date: 6/13/2023 11:45:00 AM
Fine work of art Constance!
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:48:00 PM
James, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 6/13/2023 10:39:00 AM
I felt like the tree singing a song. The artwork is great imagination. You are a winner.
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:49:00 PM
Jay, thank you so much for the comment and compliment on me and my poem !
Date: 6/13/2023 6:15:00 AM
Lovely shape and beautiful poem. This personification is remarkable . I am sure this is going to be placed at the top. All the Best dear Constance....
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:29:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, and encouragement, well, never know for sure if the sponsor will like but I can hope !
Date: 6/13/2023 5:19:00 AM
Gorgeous penning, Constance!
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:29:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 6/13/2023 2:58:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Constance…appreciating and respecting the tree in all its glory! Love it! Debx
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:30:00 AM
Deb, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !
Date: 6/13/2023 2:35:00 AM
Beautiful shape and message, Constance:)
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:31:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !

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