In This Sky of Night

I look at shining stars in cobalt sky with just one wish to make on only one of billions of them in this Galaxy where we're just one small planet with a sun! And as I gaze, my mind is taking flight: Beyond the moon and through the milky way, we’re holding hands and soaring through a night of fantasy on beautiful display! We fly past Jupiter’s four rings of dust, then far away to Pluto. Yes, we dare! We circle back. How cold Mars is. We must warm up near Venus. Is Love’s goddess there? It matters not; my heart is ruled by YOU, and in this sky of night, dreams can come true! May 7, 2017 for Shadow Hamilton's The Night Sky Sonnets Only Contest A sonnet using the following required words: Shin(e)ing, Moon, Star/s, Planet, Mars, Venus, Jupiter, Pluto and the Milky Way
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Date: 1/7/2020 2:02:00 AM
Andrea, this is art, fantasy, romance, science fiction, and poetry wrapped up in one. I can see why this is one of your favorites. I love the mention of Love's goddess as you approach Venus. A fav. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 6/16/2017 11:27:00 PM
I love the stars, we used to sleep out in the backyard as kids. Great imagery. :)
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Date: 6/4/2017 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful journey of the heart to the heart. Superbly done my dear friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/26/2017 2:35:00 PM
To bad you can't get 10's for your pieces of art.
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Date: 5/25/2017 2:03:00 PM
One of my favorite things is to look up at the magnificent night sky and you have captured the romance and beauty on this lovely canvas. A 7 of course! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 5/23/2017 2:24:00 PM
Thank you for the trip through the Galaxy I enjoyed the journey. Now Ihave an idea how to use requied words.
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Date: 5/19/2017 3:09:00 PM
A lovely celestial trip thru our galaxy and great use of the required words, Andrea. congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/19/2017 12:32:00 PM
Lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:55:00 AM
Andrea, wonderful write :) congratulations on your win ! ~*
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Date: 5/19/2017 4:20:00 AM
Like two stars, holding hands, zooming through the Galaxy! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 5/17/2017 11:35:00 AM
Excellent poem my dear lovely friend. Firstly, 7 and secondly my fav. one. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/17/2017 11:33:00 AM
Excellent poem my dear lovely friend. Firstly, 7 and secondly my fav. one. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/16/2017 2:40:00 PM
Hi Andrea, a wonderful Sonnet you do create with your words. You take us on a journey through the heavens with the most gentle words to shape your image on the canvas of the mind. Yes, in the night sky dreams do come true. I know that for a fact. It is a wonderful pleasure to be reading your excellent poetry once more Andrea. With such gentle ease your words do bring the night's sky right before us and we bathe in its wonder. This is a 7 and a fave. Good luck in the contest. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/11/2017 8:04:00 PM
Lovely journey through the night sky. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:46:00 PM
You don't get enough credit. Just my humble opinion.
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:45:00 PM
Wow you are really on a roll. Another amazing write. A Huge fav! Talk about a prolific writer. Prolific and not a grain of excellence sacrificed.
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Date: 5/10/2017 4:45:00 PM
Oh so beautiful Andrea your words are lovely on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 5/8/2017 2:57:00 PM
Yes, I am traveling with you to all these planets, Andrea. Fantastic language " on beautiful display."
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Date: 5/8/2017 8:36:00 AM
Excellent. Very beautifully written with lovely imagination. Nice pic. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/8/2017 4:05:00 AM
Beautiful journey... Lovely imagery Andrea... I loved it... Great take... Reads like a winner... A big 7...
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Date: 5/8/2017 12:14:00 AM
Hi Andrea. You have molded these words into an awesome poem! Did you know that Jupiter having rings is also a Mandela effect? I looked it up. Anyway,this is a beautiful sonnet. : ) 7
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Date: 5/7/2017 11:42:00 PM
Lovely sonnet!
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Date: 5/7/2017 10:19:00 PM
Beautiful, but I must be upfront now, I dont really rule the universe, well yet! LOL Hugs! :)
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Date: 5/7/2017 8:41:00 PM
A superb sonnet, Andrea! You have done well to include SO many words! And that image really sets the scene! Best of luck to you!
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Date: 5/7/2017 6:50:00 PM
You never disappoint, Andrea. Beautiful!
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