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In the Wilderness

In the midst of spacious green fields, the green eyes watch & wait They've planted seeds of discord that can't yield, for they were sown with seething hate Watch for the clever snakes in tall grass looking to strike before you're warned Expose wolves in sheep's clothing in a flash, as they can't hide once they're shorn We're torn between forces of dark & light battling for our very souls It's hard to maintain your cool in this heated fight even if your emotions turn cold The victor will be the one that's fed the most, as both sides want to eat I hope I continue to be a most gracious host in the presence of a beast

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Date: 10/7/2023 9:12:00 AM
This is a well written rhyme Jasen. Expressed so well- very atmospheric and I sense lots of tension (need to be on your guard!) I’m keeping an eye out for those snakes! Great imagery transports you there at the scene.I love the last two lines in particular. Great rhyming and flow throughout gives a very enjoyable read my friend. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend :)
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 10/9/2023 5:25:00 AM
Thank you, Christina, always good to hear from you! Weekend went well no complaints hope yours did also. Blessings

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