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In the Presence of Death

When you see the gasps And the struggles for air Each breath a sacrifice For the paradise that awaits Soon it will be over But peace stays away Death isn't easy when it comes And life before is unbearable The last inhale and Exhale so taxing 6:35am and his morning has ended My mourning has just begun As I sit there by the bed Holding his hand now yellow Gasping to find my own air Stolen from me by Death Its presence now filling the room As I shrink into nothingness Struggling to stay alive While Death holds me in a tight embrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/5/2018 10:00:00 PM
Your poem conveys such heartache and sadness so beautifully. A compelling poem. Congratulations, Sasha, on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this deep moving poem, Sasha, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:19:00 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Sasha :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:09:00 AM
Sad poetry Sasha.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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