Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Quatrain

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- In the Power of Death and the Depths of Darkness -

In order to obtain true freedom in our lives
Close your eyes and see the light of an angel
Wondering what this life is really all about
That it will guide you to a brighter place without turns 

Thoughts about the night with a last kiss will be my end
As night becomes desperate to sleep 
Tenderly rocked in your loving arms
Seduced by the dark side hiding ghosts roam


Desperation within hopeless pleas, the angel wings are broken
After walking on coals fired inside aches burning 
It hurts so bad, the emotions of losing control
Show me the way love in true heavenly beauties charm

Let's break the chains burning without fire 
In your power shines a beacon starlight 
The pain, the demons leave inside causing our sins
Strong within it's beam pierces through the gates of hell 

I can hardly breathe, in this dream where nobody dies
Forgiving past sins kisses everything better
The eyes are not blind, a rainbow of sorrow shines 
Breaking free from chains of a pain linked curse

Could it be we have chosen exactly the right words of love 
I am not your resistance building castles in the sky without storms 
Born in the republic swept a\way within a dream swept away 
I'll walk with you through the age of eternities golden gate bridge




A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
18.06.2016
(unrhymed Quatrain)
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Phyllis Babcock July 16, 2016 at 3:49 PM Simply beautiful coll you two. A dark powerful poem and different from your usual ones. Awesome. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2016 at 8:16 AM - Thank you very much, glad you like it Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman July 8, 2016 at 9:21 AM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, I missed this one, but I'm glad I've read it now. This one's a most powerful dark collaboration for sure. The imagery is both palpable and demonstrative. Most Excellent!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2016 at 9:31 AM - Glad you like it, although this is a bit dark poetry - Many thanks for the beautiful words, TR/FAV and friendly visit, dear Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler June 26, 2016 at 1:11 PM Love will overcome darkness always... I really enjoyed this beautiful poem with it's elements of both dark and light... Another great collaboration from you and Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen June 26, 2016 at 4:38 PM - Kelly, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Tom Quigley June 23, 2016 at 8:18 PM Great collaboration and beautiful write! Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2016 at 6:41 AM - Tom, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Bl Devnath June 22, 2016 at 10:19 AM Excellent collaboration my lovely lovely friend. Both you are genius always. A nice 7. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2016 at 11:43 AM - Bl, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Becca Teagan June 22, 2016 at 8:49 AM This is amazing, an epic poem from you and Liam, you two work well together. Great job! Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2016 at 8:55 AM - Becca, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis June 20, 2016 at 4:58 AM Another marvel of your collaboration! A seven to each of you, Anne-Lise and Liam! Superbly written! Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2016 at 7:20 AM - Demetrios, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Richard Lamoureux June 19, 2016 at 8:31 AM Smooth like chocolate, dark and delicious! Great Colaboration. Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2016 at 8:35 AM .... When it comes to chocolate .... the dark is the best .... and even healthy :))) - Richard, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Constance La France June 19, 2016 at 7:58 AM Sunshine, this is a BEAUTIFUL collaboration. You both did an ..a m a z I n g ...job penning this poem and I am "loving" it 7~ Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2016 at 8:11 AM - B.W., thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2016 at 8:14 PM dark and beautiful one from you two. Interesting with unrhymed quatrains. Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2016 at 7:07 AM - Andrea, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Dorian Petersen Potter June 18, 2016 at 5:05 PM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful, heartfelt, but very deep, and dark, mostly sad love poem, that you've painted here this time my dearest friends.!Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written in all its darkness, sadness and wide array of feelings and emotions.Just awesome!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Just amazing!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen June 19, 2016 at 7:07 AM - Dorian, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Liam Mcdaid June 18, 2016 at 4:15 PM thank you anne lise dear pal for the true pleasure of joining ink with me your a dear friend wishing you a blessing of a weekend Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2016 at 4:30 PM - Always a pleasure, my friend Liam :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 18, 2016 at 4:14 PM deep and stark; a greeat combination of moods for this theme.. another laurel for you and liam... happy father's day, anne and huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2016 at 4:38 PM - A pleasure to share with you Nette, many thanks :) - (is not Father's Day in Norway this month) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)