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In the Pink

Morning is a cistern; its beauty laid out bare to my naked eye. Round, golden-amber flame, gradual is your eager burning one with significant strength and worth. Your potent, pinkish explosion is placed in view, in which, my eyes are glazed over what falls before me. Your blushing tone angles as it also reflects itself above the sound of water so perfected, brimming of detail; coming in to fully focus in a moment of friendly favor. A received silence securely seizing me with its mighty magnetism and stunning stimulus.

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Date: 7/18/2009 10:05:00 AM
Wow. Lovely. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Presently not active on the soup, but hope to be back soon. In the process of moving, so here on and off. Look forward to reading more of your work soon! Love, Shar
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