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In the Orangery

she comes here to sit still, and be alone the scent of orange blossoms in the air of the outside world she is hardly aware pouring over a book written by old masters poems that transport her mind and soul away written words that she will carry through the day to soon the afternoon becomes the evening return she must to her life beyond these walls with blossoms in her heart, she goes where duty calls 7/19/14

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:10:00 PM
A wonderful win...PD
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Date: 7/24/2014 12:05:00 AM
wow,that last part is so sweet: with blossoms in her heart. Reminds me of how my mother loves so much to read scriptures to help see her through the day. Wonderful poem win, Barbara. Big congrats.
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Date: 7/23/2014 2:13:00 PM
It is my pleasure, especially when the writing is so good!
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Date: 7/23/2014 1:19:00 PM
This perfect little poem is a gem ! Well done, Barbara !! (I can smell the scent of orange blossoms)....:)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/23/2014 2:20:00 PM
We are actually, Red Bluff.......but you were close !! :) (small time girl....that's me !! lol )
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2014 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Carrie..how are you..hope your enjoying the summer up there in Redding..BG
Date: 7/23/2014 10:27:00 AM
Congrats for your well, deserved win Barbara! Regards, Teddy.
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on a great win BG
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Date: 7/23/2014 7:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations - loved it the first time I read it! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2014 7:49:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations on your top placement.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2014 2:02:00 PM
Thank you! Means a lot that you stopped by...Barbara
Date: 7/23/2014 7:30:00 AM
Congrats on your big win my friend!!! A fine picture you painted in lovely words!!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2014 2:01:00 PM
Hi Robert..thank you for your kindness..
Date: 7/23/2014 7:20:00 AM
Big congratulations to you Barbara for your TOP win. Well-deserved, my friend! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/23/2014 5:43:00 AM
Congrats on top win, dear Barbara! Love.. Blossoms in her heart.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/23/2014 5:05:00 AM
And back again with big congrats on ur top first place win my dear friend Barbara!
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:35:00 AM
Absolutely stunning! You have captured that moment in time to perfection. Congrats...
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2014 2:01:00 PM
thank you Mark...Glad you stopped by, I appreciate it. Barbara
Date: 7/20/2014 6:52:00 AM
Hi Barbara, your take on the picture is really good. I love the ending "with blossoms in her heart". To me it's a winner! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/23/2014 8:16:00 AM
...and a winner it surely is!! Congratulations!!!
Date: 7/19/2014 11:45:00 PM
Dear Barbara: Lovely write. Lovely read. Lovely orangery. I am transported to a realm of calm BG. A sentimental 7 in my view. Thanks. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 7/19/2014 3:50:00 PM
Quite a nice, mellow mood to this.......I envy her the orangery to read in. :) Good luck in the competition!
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Date: 7/19/2014 3:13:00 PM
Sounds like the perfect place to spend the day...you will have to invite me to join you one day.....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/19/2014 1:38:00 PM
Simply stunning . Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/19/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thank you! I love his contests with pictures for inspiration.
Date: 7/19/2014 1:15:00 PM
This is well thought n penned Barbara! Gl in contest !
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/19/2014 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Upma..for some reason this came easier than some others. I wrote it while walking this morning.

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