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Edward Ibeh's contest using Yalto form (created by Edward)

Pick a Title Vol 53

7/7/2025

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In the Mouth of Desire touching me your lips, your tongue chalice filled with sweet fruit we’re no longer friends when we sup lovers once again we can’t get enough sucking grapes nibbling red apples tender, the nape of neck at eureka’s urging

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Date: 7/20/2025 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations friend on your win in this contest with a lovely poem with appealing words and form pleasing to read. Wish you a cheerful day.
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Date: 7/19/2025 5:45:00 PM
Kim, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this masterfully written, sensual Yalto. A fave.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2025 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! I’m glad you liked it!
Date: 7/7/2025 5:18:00 PM
This is really erotic, and a perfect metaphor for it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 7:11:00 PM
Thank you! Hopefully not too much. Had in mind a marital love, in making love you become closer than friends.
Date: 7/7/2025 1:17:00 PM
What a lovely write you have here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Paula!
Date: 7/7/2025 10:57:00 AM
ohh la la Kim very sensual indeed! hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2025 12:09:00 PM
Glad you liked…lol! Hugs

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